for Wrong8/16/2008 c1 Counting Petals
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I didn't really like the rhyme scheme, because I felt like it was s bit forced. For example: "Being around him makes my spirits soar/and our time is never a bore."
I do like the idea though, because I think it's got a lot of potential. I just think you need to work on it more.
Review Marathon! (If you're confused, there's a link on my profile.)
I didn't really like the rhyme scheme, because I felt like it was s bit forced. For example: "Being around him makes my spirits soar/and our time is never a bore."
I do like the idea though, because I think it's got a lot of potential. I just think you need to work on it more.