for Sleeping with the Enemy8/16/2008 c1 
1Satsuma-Pluie
Nice story so far. It has a lot of promise. It's hard to say whether or not this one is going to get really good, seeing as all it really is is the exposition. I hope your next chapters will live up to your first one.
1Satsuma-PluieNice story so far. It has a lot of promise. It's hard to say whether or not this one is going to get really good, seeing as all it really is is the exposition. I hope your next chapters will live up to your first one.
8/16/2008 c1 1ashtonaesthetic
Haha. I love your story and I hope you update soon. I really want to see what other cruel jokes Lydia plays on them. Everything was good for me. Two thumbs up. But one question. What are lofahs? I like the length too. Not super unbearably long but not like super short where it gives no info. Wish I had more consturctive criticism but I think it has amazing potential. Thanks.
1ashtonaestheticHaha. I love your story and I hope you update soon. I really want to see what other cruel jokes Lydia plays on them. Everything was good for me. Two thumbs up. But one question. What are lofahs? I like the length too. Not super unbearably long but not like super short where it gives no info. Wish I had more consturctive criticism but I think it has amazing potential. Thanks.
8/16/2008 c1 3hopeless.romantic.x3
haha that's so freaking amazing! i love it! can't wait for the next chappie!
3hopeless.romantic.x3haha that's so freaking amazing! i love it! can't wait for the next chappie!
8/16/2008 c1 TwinkleHeart
aiyo...why does it say the story is completed T.T i thought it was a oneshot...are there more to this? it's quite interesting =D hope to read more!..if theres more
aiyo...why does it say the story is completed T.T i thought it was a oneshot...are there more to this? it's quite interesting =D hope to read more!..if theres more