
3/12/2011 c42
6theStarfly
The fuck was that ending? Total cop out! XD
Are you going to write any more or just leave everyone hanging?
Like a sequel?
I loved this story, you're an amazing writer, please please please don't say that was the end all be all end !

The fuck was that ending? Total cop out! XD
Are you going to write any more or just leave everyone hanging?
Like a sequel?
I loved this story, you're an amazing writer, please please please don't say that was the end all be all end !
2/10/2009 c42 TrueLoveStoriesNeverHaveEnding
ok i have to say that you did absolutely amazing. You made everything so clear that i could picture it perfectly. I love it. I cant wait to read the rest of the other books!
ok i have to say that you did absolutely amazing. You made everything so clear that i could picture it perfectly. I love it. I cant wait to read the rest of the other books!
1/3/2009 c42
45Jessicuh
NO! That can't be the end! D: You have to write MOAR. Do another book! Hmm or maybe you have? Hn, I must look. but NO where ish muh yaoi? *cries* Btw, this story is really good. Lol I loved it obvobv.

NO! That can't be the end! D: You have to write MOAR. Do another book! Hmm or maybe you have? Hn, I must look. but NO where ish muh yaoi? *cries* Btw, this story is really good. Lol I loved it obvobv.
12/26/2008 c12 transitionofthe
hm,poor matt having his twin try to hurt his boyfriend.that is a twist isn't it
hm,poor matt having his twin try to hurt his boyfriend.that is a twist isn't it
12/21/2008 c9
4The Howler
...Dude. That was intense. Guy on guy action...WOAH. At first I hadn't exspected it...Then BANG! Right in muh face.
But, hey. It's good! This story is really good.

...Dude. That was intense. Guy on guy action...WOAH. At first I hadn't exspected it...Then BANG! Right in muh face.
But, hey. It's good! This story is really good.
12/20/2008 c1
5Mekena VerSluis
"He was a beautiful person, naturally elegant, with the blood accenting his fair skin. He seemed to sparkle in the moonlight."
You make Kain sound like a twilight Vampire. LMAO!

"He was a beautiful person, naturally elegant, with the blood accenting his fair skin. He seemed to sparkle in the moonlight."
You make Kain sound like a twilight Vampire. LMAO!