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11/8/2008 c1 8Ohka Breynekai
I already reviewed this. Go find the email. I'm too tired to really review again...

Oh, darn you, standing in the corner and making me feel guilty. Okay...

To sum it up, depressing once again, but the hope you present at the end is very refreshing.

And I love the comparison of the vein to a mother.

Beautiful. +fav

O.B.
9/8/2008 c1 16PopMakesMeBurpy
youre right, depressing. i was holding my breath the mojority of it. oh and one question, was it Al who stopped you? just wondering.
8/17/2008 c1 10Koki Enwai
Really good imagery here; I could see it all in my head, playing out like a movie. This was really well done and I enjoyed reading it.

Thanks for sharing!

- Koki

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