for Hopes & Dreams: Stars of Heaven9/8/2008 c1 
17Unique1952
Aw, this is really beautiful. I tried to pick out a favorite stanza, but I couldn't, it all very very good. Nice work with this, this poem goes over a lot of things that I believe in and because of this, I've really enjoyed reading. Again, nice work.
17Unique1952Aw, this is really beautiful. I tried to pick out a favorite stanza, but I couldn't, it all very very good. Nice work with this, this poem goes over a lot of things that I believe in and because of this, I've really enjoyed reading. Again, nice work.
9/3/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
The rhyme in the first stanza sounds a bit forced, but other than that the rhyming was nicely done. The last line was a bit cliched, but the rest is nice. I also like your word choices with "unconquerable" "futile" "fickle", etc.
612simpleplan13The rhyme in the first stanza sounds a bit forced, but other than that the rhyming was nicely done. The last line was a bit cliched, but the rest is nice. I also like your word choices with "unconquerable" "futile" "fickle", etc.
8/26/2008 c1 15Scarlett Wynter
pretty good for something you wrote quickly! My motto exactly, don't despair, dream & hope instead! =]
15Scarlett Wynterpretty good for something you wrote quickly! My motto exactly, don't despair, dream & hope instead! =]