for Unwanted9/29/2008 c3 
21Aiko-Moon
Hmm, well to start I like the idea of the story. But not to be to mean, I kind of perdicted that what happedned was going to happen to her. it's not exactely your tipical vampire/werewolf story, but it has most of the characertistics.
But I like it, I'm actually qutite interested in what will happen between her and Bryce. Keep writing, can't wait to read more.
21Aiko-MoonHmm, well to start I like the idea of the story. But not to be to mean, I kind of perdicted that what happedned was going to happen to her. it's not exactely your tipical vampire/werewolf story, but it has most of the characertistics.
But I like it, I'm actually qutite interested in what will happen between her and Bryce. Keep writing, can't wait to read more.
9/16/2008 c3 5RyAnn Leigh
Very interesting. I would like to know what's going to happen and what happened to Lucus. It seems a great concept and I'm looking forward to more.
5RyAnn LeighVery interesting. I would like to know what's going to happen and what happened to Lucus. It seems a great concept and I'm looking forward to more.
9/12/2008 c3 5Feblinhoi-BattlefieldOfTheDead
Thank you for reviewing mine by the way! XD
This is really good, and I want to know what happens! Its one of those things that you try to guess what's happened, but you don't knw for sure... keep it up!
5Feblinhoi-BattlefieldOfTheDeadThank you for reviewing mine by the way! XD
This is really good, and I want to know what happens! Its one of those things that you try to guess what's happened, but you don't knw for sure... keep it up!
8/27/2008 c2 crescent shadow
This seems interesting. I'm anxious to see how you avoid falling into the cliches of typical vampire stories.
This seems interesting. I'm anxious to see how you avoid falling into the cliches of typical vampire stories.
8/22/2008 c2 70TheBeautyOfTheGrave
It's good. I like it. Original idea and I would love to read more. In response to your PM, of course I will Beta it, glad to though to be honest it doesn't need a lot of work.
Still, I'll give you all the help I can.
God Bless You
~Holli x
70TheBeautyOfTheGraveIt's good. I like it. Original idea and I would love to read more. In response to your PM, of course I will Beta it, glad to though to be honest it doesn't need a lot of work.
Still, I'll give you all the help I can.
God Bless You
~Holli x