for Not Good Enough For Truth In Cliché12/25/2008 c2 
11ForestReverie
NOT GOOD ENOUGH FOR TRUTH IN CLICHE BY ESCAPE THE FATE! haha. I like that song and your story.
Update soon?
11ForestReverieNOT GOOD ENOUGH FOR TRUTH IN CLICHE BY ESCAPE THE FATE! haha. I like that song and your story.
Update soon?
11/6/2008 c2 reasonablyinsane
Not Good Enough For Truth In Cliché:
Hey, I just read this story, and its acutally pretty good. I cant wait to read the next chapter.
Hey, I dont know if u want it or anything, but if u need some help or any ideas maybe, just send me a line. I might be able to help...lol i used to write once upon a time. :)
Peace Mah Cherrios!
Not Good Enough For Truth In Cliché:
Hey, I just read this story, and its acutally pretty good. I cant wait to read the next chapter.
Hey, I dont know if u want it or anything, but if u need some help or any ideas maybe, just send me a line. I might be able to help...lol i used to write once upon a time. :)
Peace Mah Cherrios!
8/26/2008 c2 9Stooped
UMG! YOU ARE SUCH A BUTT! Jeez. Are you EVAR gonna post the next chapter. Goodness.
9StoopedUMG! YOU ARE SUCH A BUTT! Jeez. Are you EVAR gonna post the next chapter. Goodness.
8/18/2008 c1 9Stooped
Oh my god! THIS IS AMAZING! But... what the butt is up with Jayden. I mean, for honestly. If he's gonna strike up a conversation with someone... Whatever. I guess I'll find out in the up-coming chapters! Update soon!
9StoopedOh my god! THIS IS AMAZING! But... what the butt is up with Jayden. I mean, for honestly. If he's gonna strike up a conversation with someone... Whatever. I guess I'll find out in the up-coming chapters! Update soon!
8/18/2008 c1 Nakigoe Ketsurui
Not Good Enough For The Truth In Cliche by Escape The Fate? Lol awesomeness, haha.
Anyway, yes, I like this. And I laughed when the person said 'guy-liner' it makes me giggle xD Anyway, very nice so far, I'd like to read more!
Not Good Enough For The Truth In Cliche by Escape The Fate? Lol awesomeness, haha.
Anyway, yes, I like this. And I laughed when the person said 'guy-liner' it makes me giggle xD Anyway, very nice so far, I'd like to read more!
8/18/2008 c1 blupomodoro
it made me laugh. I'm not sure if that's totally good, but good start so far, at least you have some type of problem introduced (unlike about everybody else). critique-wise, I would love to see a description of Dave, what he looks like, and what his personality is. keep writing =)
it made me laugh. I'm not sure if that's totally good, but good start so far, at least you have some type of problem introduced (unlike about everybody else). critique-wise, I would love to see a description of Dave, what he looks like, and what his personality is. keep writing =)