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11/15/2008 c1 DYLAN KLEBOLD OF COLUMBINE
I make a dib on this.
8/21/2008 c1 4Stone Hatcher
A very well written submission, very enticing and draws you in almost immediately. My only suggestion, is read it through yourself a couple of times, you've got some duplicated words in spots and spots where words seem to be missing. But overall, really good.
8/21/2008 c1 10Koki Enwai
Ah, kind of creepy. Overall, it was a really good read. Nice work. I'm glad that I clicked on this story.

- Koki

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