for A War To End All Wars4/11/2009 c1 
26Mirabella
This is very good!
The lines
"No more war!" their final lie,
As they died on peaceful swords"
are well done!
26MirabellaThis is very good!
The lines
"No more war!" their final lie,
As they died on peaceful swords"
are well done!
9/2/2008 c1 91MyInspiration
Different, and great. I liked the imagery and the fantasy creatures. When you say the asme thing a lot of ther poeple say (like ending war) in a totally new, creative way, it makes more of an impact.
91MyInspirationDifferent, and great. I liked the imagery and the fantasy creatures. When you say the asme thing a lot of ther poeple say (like ending war) in a totally new, creative way, it makes more of an impact.
8/25/2008 c1 4Crystalline Snow
loved it! there's such feeling in it and I love the irony in it. No more suffering, no more bloodshed, no more death and all this should happen in the war to end all wars. I also loved the message this poem gives us, which is that you can't fight war with war.
4Crystalline Snowloved it! there's such feeling in it and I love the irony in it. No more suffering, no more bloodshed, no more death and all this should happen in the war to end all wars. I also loved the message this poem gives us, which is that you can't fight war with war.
8/21/2008 c1 9When Twilight Fades
Isn't that just the truth. It's a great big circle. "Let's kill people who kill people, to show other people who kill people that killing people is wrong." :) xD Good job on this.
:.When Twilight Fades.:
9When Twilight FadesIsn't that just the truth. It's a great big circle. "Let's kill people who kill people, to show other people who kill people that killing people is wrong." :) xD Good job on this.
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