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8/21/2008 c1 9intensity
I am very picky about poetry, and I like 99% of this piece. I'm not so sure about the warning at the very end, was that to the gods/goddesses that be, or to whom? I was left confused.

I do like your form. It has a nice fairy tale, smooth flow without getting too cheesy with rhymes. I think you are the first person I've come across who can effectively pull that off, so many congrats to you :)

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