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3/1/2009 c1 16inkybetterdays
This story makes me shiver every time I read it. It's beautifully written of course. You describe everything so well and really bring out the emotions these characters are feeling. Great job with this. I love it (in a creepy, perverted way, of course)! :)

-Edward/Buch-Buch
1/6/2009 c1 5Sakiinyourdreams
oh my god. WOW! That was so intense. And severely creepy. I think I'll actually have nightmares tonight. The image of her dying in that car, what a way to go. Death by fire seems like absolutely the most painful way and you described it so well. This story was amazing. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more of your work.
1/4/2009 c1 1HeadInTheClouds1178
That is REALLY good, but I am totally creeped out. You gave me the shivers, and not many people can do that. You are an amazing author, although you wrote: "Greg dragged Kelsey’s lifeless from the car" I think you meant 'lifeless BODY.' Just BTW.

AWESOME!

(It was one-shot, right)

HeadInTheClouds1178 (a.k.a Lindsay)
8/24/2008 c1 fasdfasfasdfads
Good story dude!

I find it somewhat funny...their mark!

ha ha!

Also consider yourself accomplished to actually get me to log in to review XD.
8/22/2008 c1 1broken'down-over.and.over
gotta say this does make more sense then the other 'ending'

still love it and still awesome!

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