8/19/2015 c7 Guest
it's not her i'll betch a
it's not her i'll betch a
2/3/2015 c7 Alia
Poor dude. That would've never worked on me either. If I knew that person and he doesn't know any other girls then herself. It's obviously her! Unless its his sisters which would be weird...
Poor dude. That would've never worked on me either. If I knew that person and he doesn't know any other girls then herself. It's obviously her! Unless its his sisters which would be weird...
11/30/2014 c27 Sarah
I love your story it has an amazing plot i wish reality was like that. You did an amazing job!
I love your story it has an amazing plot i wish reality was like that. You did an amazing job!
11/27/2014 c25 lihle
Best story I have ever read I lve it so much wish it could carrry on but life is lIfe. Thankx
Best story I have ever read I lve it so much wish it could carrry on but life is lIfe. Thankx
11/13/2014 c27 Guest
Well that escalated pretty quickly and then bam allhappy and blissful ending. Sadly I still not convinced whether hayden wont lie to her a second time if anything health related ever happens to him. No matter what his excuse is, and I know its hard seeing people you love in pain, but a relationship never works out without trust and honesty. What he has is a reasonable fear but it doesnt make it right or give him an excuse to do what he did. Moments ago he was just talking about not regretting what he did and then the next thing you know hes promising her that he wont lie again. But if it were to happen will he not really lie to her like that again? Sorry but im not convinced, in fact, im almost sure he still will and it irritates me. Im scared of hurting you so I wont tell you the truth, is, and forever will be a selfish reason, no matter how much you sugarcoat it. In the end you only hurt the people you love more and to add to that you create a strain in your relationship and a broken trust. She really deserves a better assurance than that. I mean if hes like that when theyre still boyfriend and girlfriend would you imagine what hed be like when theyre married? What husband would lie to his wife about something so important like his health? Just to quote n unqoute spare her the pain when in relaity hes not, he would only add up to it. It really disappointed me, haydens character that is. What would he do if theyre roles would be reversed? Its not like shed say oh thank you for not telling me I appreciate not knowing you might be dying thanks for sparing me unnecessary pain. Cringe everybody cringe.
Well that escalated pretty quickly and then bam allhappy and blissful ending. Sadly I still not convinced whether hayden wont lie to her a second time if anything health related ever happens to him. No matter what his excuse is, and I know its hard seeing people you love in pain, but a relationship never works out without trust and honesty. What he has is a reasonable fear but it doesnt make it right or give him an excuse to do what he did. Moments ago he was just talking about not regretting what he did and then the next thing you know hes promising her that he wont lie again. But if it were to happen will he not really lie to her like that again? Sorry but im not convinced, in fact, im almost sure he still will and it irritates me. Im scared of hurting you so I wont tell you the truth, is, and forever will be a selfish reason, no matter how much you sugarcoat it. In the end you only hurt the people you love more and to add to that you create a strain in your relationship and a broken trust. She really deserves a better assurance than that. I mean if hes like that when theyre still boyfriend and girlfriend would you imagine what hed be like when theyre married? What husband would lie to his wife about something so important like his health? Just to quote n unqoute spare her the pain when in relaity hes not, he would only add up to it. It really disappointed me, haydens character that is. What would he do if theyre roles would be reversed? Its not like shed say oh thank you for not telling me I appreciate not knowing you might be dying thanks for sparing me unnecessary pain. Cringe everybody cringe.
11/4/2014 c28 8DenimKitty
Just spent like two hours reading this, and congratulations, it was a good read, few typos here and there but I mean, there are 61 000 words not every single one will be perfect. Anyways, good job for finishing the story, I'm sure you worked hard on this during the 3 years.
Just spent like two hours reading this, and congratulations, it was a good read, few typos here and there but I mean, there are 61 000 words not every single one will be perfect. Anyways, good job for finishing the story, I'm sure you worked hard on this during the 3 years.
3/14/2014 c6 333
LOVE IT BABES
LOVE IT BABES
2/4/2014 c27 2Marguerite Grimmett
Awww that's so cute! I love this story! Sad it's over, but of course you wouldn't drag it on.
Awww that's so cute! I love this story! Sad it's over, but of course you wouldn't drag it on.
2/4/2014 c25 Marguerite Grimmett
YAYAY Cira and Hayden deserve to be together. I just really hope Hayden wasn't lying about his health. :D
YAYAY Cira and Hayden deserve to be together. I just really hope Hayden wasn't lying about his health. :D
2/4/2014 c14 Marguerite Grimmett
Eh. Analise is a bitch. Really don't like her. :) But great chapter! I hope Cira gets revenge.
Eh. Analise is a bitch. Really don't like her. :) But great chapter! I hope Cira gets revenge.
2/4/2014 c12 Marguerite Grimmett
Ahha, I didn't get the 'make up for it' think until Cira's mom starting berating Cira's dad. :P
Ahha, I didn't get the 'make up for it' think until Cira's mom starting berating Cira's dad. :P
2/4/2014 c10 Marguerite Grimmett
And... I'm wrong and right at the same time about Jason and Cira. I think that the rejection thing could've been further detailed, but maybe that only would've happened if it happened in Cira's point of view. I guess it's fine. :D
And... I'm wrong and right at the same time about Jason and Cira. I think that the rejection thing could've been further detailed, but maybe that only would've happened if it happened in Cira's point of view. I guess it's fine. :D