for A Trip On the Lips9/28/2009 c9 Sha-bam
no
shes just jumping to the point!
HE CAN'T!
it should be that kendra chick
no
shes just jumping to the point!
HE CAN'T!
it should be that kendra chick
9/28/2009 c8 Sha-bam
wooz I wonder who she is...
wooz I wonder who she is...
9/28/2009 c7 Sha-bam
OMG!
i bet jasons crush isn't her xd
por haydee
OMG!
i bet jasons crush isn't her xd
por haydee
9/28/2009 c6 Sha-bam
wo
go Hayden!
another great chap but picked up another mistake:
"-at all, Mrs. Breese, or Trisha, as she-"
Two chapters ago it was Sara rather then Trisha
wo
go Hayden!
another great chap but picked up another mistake:
"-at all, Mrs. Breese, or Trisha, as she-"
Two chapters ago it was Sara rather then Trisha
9/28/2009 c5 Sha-bam
loved the chapter
the family sounds kewl
loved the chapter
the family sounds kewl
9/27/2009 c4 Sha-bam
such a interesting family
but one thing i noticed.
dunno if any1 else has said it but ill say anyway coz you might want to change it:
"-whole family in it; it must have been several years ago because the twins looked like babies."
You said they were five earlier in the chapter
such a interesting family
but one thing i noticed.
dunno if any1 else has said it but ill say anyway coz you might want to change it:
"-whole family in it; it must have been several years ago because the twins looked like babies."
You said they were five earlier in the chapter
9/27/2009 c3 Sha-bam
wonder what type of kids they are...
wonder what type of kids they are...
9/27/2009 c2 Sha-bam
so cute
so much blushing in this chapter xD
so cute
so much blushing in this chapter xD
9/27/2009 c1 Sha-bam
hahaha this sounds awwesome
hahaha this sounds awwesome
9/3/2009 c27 Classychik
that was such a lovely story and ending, five thumbs up! (even though I only have two, lol!:) )
that was such a lovely story and ending, five thumbs up! (even though I only have two, lol!:) )
9/2/2009 c25 
2akaCHEEKS
“Okay, let’s cut the crap. I fully intend to be with you long after college and so yes, it’s my ring I want on your finger and it’s my bed where you’ll be sleeping every night. That being said, I’m not sure" god i just think that just sounds soo sexy! haha mann! good job at writing this! i really really liked it! i thought fictionpress was running out of good authors and voila! there you are! i am definately reading the rest of your stories!
2akaCHEEKS“Okay, let’s cut the crap. I fully intend to be with you long after college and so yes, it’s my ring I want on your finger and it’s my bed where you’ll be sleeping every night. That being said, I’m not sure" god i just think that just sounds soo sexy! haha mann! good job at writing this! i really really liked it! i thought fictionpress was running out of good authors and voila! there you are! i am definately reading the rest of your stories!
9/2/2009 c27 Bluebaybiie
Aw, what a cute story :D I loved it.
Definitely will start on The Vow now :D
Aw, what a cute story :D I loved it.
Definitely will start on The Vow now :D