for A Trip On the Lips12/9/2010 c1 
2Pickles13
Intense! I love when the guy has a hot body. xD It would be a sad day if he was a nerd or something...no offense to nerds. Haha
But I think it would be better if you didn't assume what people were thinking. Just a suggestion.
2Pickles13Intense! I love when the guy has a hot body. xD It would be a sad day if he was a nerd or something...no offense to nerds. Haha
But I think it would be better if you didn't assume what people were thinking. Just a suggestion.
11/11/2010 c6 SeraLee
Oh, I'm already loving this story, hun. :) And did I mention my middle name is Chevalier? How awesome is that? :)
Oh, I'm already loving this story, hun. :) And did I mention my middle name is Chevalier? How awesome is that? :)
11/4/2010 c4 youngin-matomon
not much content or descriptions. and just one mistake "My mother and I expected..." shouldnt it be YOUR mother?
not much content or descriptions. and just one mistake "My mother and I expected..." shouldnt it be YOUR mother?
10/17/2010 c27 Da-zGreen
Great story! I love it! I feel so freaking sorry for Cira, how Hayden was not telling her anything but I understand why he wasn't telling her. He was trying to protect her from the pain that he saw his own family went through. I love this story. Very cliche but at the same time, very touchy. I love it. Thanks for posting this awesome story up. I hope to read more from you. Thanks!
Great story! I love it! I feel so freaking sorry for Cira, how Hayden was not telling her anything but I understand why he wasn't telling her. He was trying to protect her from the pain that he saw his own family went through. I love this story. Very cliche but at the same time, very touchy. I love it. Thanks for posting this awesome story up. I hope to read more from you. Thanks!
10/14/2010 c27 becauseSHEmatters
OMG! I love LOVE your story. You had me reading from begging to end without leaving my laptop (: lol good job!
OMG! I love LOVE your story. You had me reading from begging to end without leaving my laptop (: lol good job!
10/12/2010 c27 2Wyldfire
I absolutly positivly LOVED your story! You are a fantstic writer, please keep it up! I never wanted to leave my computer the whole time I was reading this, and I loved the ending. I juat wish I could know what the baby's gonna be and his/her name! And a sequel with Aila and Noah sounds amazing so I'll be on the lookout for that too :)
Keep writing!
2WyldfireI absolutly positivly LOVED your story! You are a fantstic writer, please keep it up! I never wanted to leave my computer the whole time I was reading this, and I loved the ending. I juat wish I could know what the baby's gonna be and his/her name! And a sequel with Aila and Noah sounds amazing so I'll be on the lookout for that too :)
Keep writing!
9/6/2010 c27 Dwindling Fire
NAW absolutely loved it! and had me distracted for a good hour instead of studying for my exam in a couple of hours :S WISH ME LUCK!
NAW absolutely loved it! and had me distracted for a good hour instead of studying for my exam in a couple of hours :S WISH ME LUCK!