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for surrealist love poem

8/23/2008 c1 53Katie Nicole
I expected this poem to be about Love, the Emotion, but it was about you. I like the way you describe yourself, trying to define something without distinct borders. And I like the last line, because it tells that the author isn't struggling with his/herself, but instead has come to terms with who they are.

Lovely.

Katie
8/23/2008 c1 130D351
interesting message... though the follow-through comes off as a bit pretentious.

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