
10/7/2011 c1 skylark
Hahaha...I enjoyed it, very much so. Hope you keep on writing!
Hahaha...I enjoyed it, very much so. Hope you keep on writing!
11/21/2010 c1
27Averick
haha this is sweet! But the poor kitty! Gasp! And Valentine...I question her motives, lol. Anywho, this is a cute a little story and it amuses me ;) You should do more with them, hehe.
By the way, hi! I'm Muffy the Dough Slayer from fanfiction lol ;)

haha this is sweet! But the poor kitty! Gasp! And Valentine...I question her motives, lol. Anywho, this is a cute a little story and it amuses me ;) You should do more with them, hehe.
By the way, hi! I'm Muffy the Dough Slayer from fanfiction lol ;)
5/22/2010 c1 Broken Bird
Very funny! Poor kitty though. Lol. I smiled a lot while reading this, and I think it made my brother suspicious. ^^
Very funny! Poor kitty though. Lol. I smiled a lot while reading this, and I think it made my brother suspicious. ^^
9/29/2009 c1
4BrownandBlueEyes
That was...strange. To say the least. Although I did enjoy it. Thumbs up. :D

That was...strange. To say the least. Although I did enjoy it. Thumbs up. :D
7/27/2009 c1 Brenda Agaro
The beginning was clever. Very good imagery and character interaction. Overall, this is an adorable story. :D
The beginning was clever. Very good imagery and character interaction. Overall, this is an adorable story. :D
6/13/2009 c1
5Said Author
Aw, the poor kitty! I tend to forget summaries right when I click on a story... but even when I read the cute that was the kitty I KNEW something bad was going to happen! DX
Hehe, that was funny. Wow... Val going through such a scheme when she could have just told Riki he couldn't cook. I was actually thinking he WAS insane until she blatantly told Riki about Jeremy's "affair".
Only thing I noticed was the phone conversation. The slashes don't really work, maybe you should stick with quotation marks and just italicize the other end of the phone conversational person? lol.
Keep it up! :}

Aw, the poor kitty! I tend to forget summaries right when I click on a story... but even when I read the cute that was the kitty I KNEW something bad was going to happen! DX
Hehe, that was funny. Wow... Val going through such a scheme when she could have just told Riki he couldn't cook. I was actually thinking he WAS insane until she blatantly told Riki about Jeremy's "affair".
Only thing I noticed was the phone conversation. The slashes don't really work, maybe you should stick with quotation marks and just italicize the other end of the phone conversational person? lol.
Keep it up! :}
6/6/2009 c1 darkestfire
I really enjoyed it. I't quite cute and adorable really. And it's funny reading about Riki in the pink apron and trying to cook. The cat's death was hilarious. I like the way you write and everything is so...well...adorable once again. :)
I really enjoyed it. I't quite cute and adorable really. And it's funny reading about Riki in the pink apron and trying to cook. The cat's death was hilarious. I like the way you write and everything is so...well...adorable once again. :)
9/1/2008 c1 cainlove23
Aw the ending was sweet. I feel so bad for the kitty. He just wanted attention and some food and what he got was death. I found what Val did was messed up, she made it that complicated just to tell him he can't cook XD I love the summary for your story, it made it seem like the meat pie was made from the kitty :P Good story cuz. And yay finally a finished one *huggy*
Aw the ending was sweet. I feel so bad for the kitty. He just wanted attention and some food and what he got was death. I found what Val did was messed up, she made it that complicated just to tell him he can't cook XD I love the summary for your story, it made it seem like the meat pie was made from the kitty :P Good story cuz. And yay finally a finished one *huggy*
8/25/2008 c1
2Chibbi Nations Ruler
wow this was really funny! i'm sad for tink of course but it's still a laugh riot! personally my favorite character is Valentine,i love thoses type of characters.
so your really Bengali? your really quick ya know that PM was in my inbox strait after i faved this. and if you wanted a Bengali's opinion, i think this is awesome! And if your talking about an opinion cuz it's yaoi then i sorta understand cuz my rents are always saying how it's wrong to be homo. yea, not like i care much (gay guys really are usually hot. yea i really liked this fic, and if you have more stuff like this i love to read you stories!

wow this was really funny! i'm sad for tink of course but it's still a laugh riot! personally my favorite character is Valentine,i love thoses type of characters.
so your really Bengali? your really quick ya know that PM was in my inbox strait after i faved this. and if you wanted a Bengali's opinion, i think this is awesome! And if your talking about an opinion cuz it's yaoi then i sorta understand cuz my rents are always saying how it's wrong to be homo. yea, not like i care much (gay guys really are usually hot. yea i really liked this fic, and if you have more stuff like this i love to read you stories!