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8/17/2009 c1 Strawberry Raindrops
Oh, that was simply fantastic! It was really creepy, and weird and strange and mysterious! I loved it, I LOVED IT.
9/24/2008 c1 9Aleksy The Flying Onion
Dang. The ending was NASTY! *squeels*

Yikes! At first I thought the girl, Sasha, might be a werewolf when the other doctor said 'her kind'...but now I'm not sure. It certainly was creepy, although I would have liked more description as to what Sasha was doing during Caroline internal monologues.

You switched tenses a couple times; a quick edit should combat that.

All in all this was a scary piece! Nice job!
8/25/2008 c1 10Koki Enwai

That was awesome. Such an original concept, too. I loved the writing style; it all flowed naturally and the narrator had a good voice.

Great work! :)

- Koki
8/25/2008 c1 11A Dark Ray of Hope
hey ashley! i must say, i'm loving this story. there were a few typos though, none very major. i'm putting it up on my alert~! :D

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