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7/9/2009 c8 1Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity
Good chapter, Gup-chan!

I think the girl is falling for her master. That would sulk

7/7/2009 c8 2AlijaS117
update soon!
7/7/2009 c1 3blankee
awesome! nice start btw!
7/7/2009 c8 Perfectly Mythical
Oh, I'm feeling dread for the upcoming events and Silenciaricus
7/5/2009 c7 Perfectly Mythical
Poor Angel...
5/7/2009 c7 3ShredBetty16
ah! I love it! It's a little jumpy at first, but still freaking awesome. write more please. and I'll try to get Midnight Heartbreak up soon, just hang in there, thanks for the reviews :]
4/13/2009 c7 2Adis Crow
His brother-interesting. I love the way Michael gets on dear Millael's nerves. And it's intriguing the way you gave both of them angel or angel-esque names. Foreshadowing?

4/5/2009 c7 anaa-pixie
ok heres the thing: THIS STORY ROCKS continue writing if its the last thing you do!
3/31/2009 c6 anaa-pixie
ok little confusing but it is a very very good story!
12/24/2008 c6 2Vampire Ash

Pul-lease continue!

ish really good!
12/2/2008 c6 2Adis Crow
I love your writing so much! You have such a wonderful, imaginative style-it sort of reminds me of the dialogue in some mangas I've read.


P.S. Are you really from The Netherlands? I've been meaning to ask for awhile.
11/20/2008 c6 2AlijaS117
love it
11/20/2008 c6 Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity
awesome chapter! i think you're writing is improving, keep it up. :3
10/5/2008 c4 24Jenni Mills
'Teacher takes my hand and brings me to somewhere.'

This is a week sentence, be more specific. Something like 'Teacher takes me to a room with white walls' ... would do the job.

'my sanity disappears'. Dramatic, but it could be a little better. For example 'my sanity slips from me'

Great chapter. The Demon king looks even more evil but the angelic realm looks pathetic - how will the poor little angel cope? I loved the section where she even owns her seperation from the angelic realm by telling them they have no power over her - maybe that will be to her benefit one day?
10/5/2008 c3 Jenni Mills
"You can bring one slave together with you." This sentence is a bit awkward, leave out 'together' and it would make more sense.

Also, I'm a little confused about the pendant. It's hidden between the wings? At the back? I just can't picture this.

But otherwise, a great chapter and I like the implication of a relationship between the two other slaves. Of course I can see where this is heading. I'm a little worried about the theme (submissive female, powerful male). But only because I want you to be a well ajusted person. LOL I'm happy to read about it.
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