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11/11/2009 c1 12Broken-Angel-1994
Oh my Gosh. This was incredible! You're an amazing poet! It flowed and it rhymed and it had feeling. Not many people can write things this great!
12/15/2008 c1 eerie regard
it makes me sad to read and brings back stories of how it was so, wonderful in the beginning and in the end it's not how they lived happily ever after at all. To be strong we must endure and in the end all will be made well again. It makes for good poetry, and I look forward to see more.
12/15/2008 c1 10LeLa London
loved your description of a heart beating, love, and heart break. :)
12/7/2008 c1 40All.PenNames.Must.Be.Unique
Very creative. I don't really know what to say except that I like it and I wish I could come up with stuff like that...
11/19/2008 c1 21MakeSarahSmile
OH MY GOODNESS ME.

I'm definitely obsessed with this poem. I can totally relate, I think a lot of people have felt what you feel. I love the way it flows too, it's almost like a song.
9/8/2008 c1 17Unique1952
Aw, this is sad yet somehow sweet all the same. This is really good and I like the way you used a "heart" in this poem. Nice work with this, I really enjoyed reading.
9/5/2008 c1 29crystalised
Loved this very much. I especially like the pockets part. :)
9/2/2008 c1 21Tiernan Hunter
Aw. Sad. Cute, but sad. I like it.
8/28/2008 c1 11crimson-reverie
aw it's so sad...but i like it
8/27/2008 c1 5Always In Motion
Aw...

that's so sad...

I'm sorry if that actually happened.
8/27/2008 c1 15WiccanGypsy
It's a beautiful poem, but sad too. Great job.

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