for Knight Love3/8/2013 c16 RandomCitizen
That ending is a bit sudden with the new element and dire wolf situation added in with all of these open ends from the side characters backstories.
That ending is a bit sudden with the new element and dire wolf situation added in with all of these open ends from the side characters backstories.
3/8/2013 c7 RandomCitizen
Is she ever going to get medical attention for these rib injuries?
Seems like you'd die from 8 to 9 hours of sex, or at least be REALLY sluggish.
Is she ever going to get medical attention for these rib injuries?
Seems like you'd die from 8 to 9 hours of sex, or at least be REALLY sluggish.
3/8/2013 c1 RandomCitizen
In the beginning the heroine was quite whiny. I coulda honestly doene with some less paragrashs on that. I mean it wasnt horrible, but I found myself skimming over it after awhile. . . sorry.
And as mentioned in your reviews there coupd be some revision done in grammer and such. However those reviewers were happy as well so I'll complete it and hope to enjoy it as the others did. :3
In the beginning the heroine was quite whiny. I coulda honestly doene with some less paragrashs on that. I mean it wasnt horrible, but I found myself skimming over it after awhile. . . sorry.
And as mentioned in your reviews there coupd be some revision done in grammer and such. However those reviewers were happy as well so I'll complete it and hope to enjoy it as the others did. :3
6/6/2012 c3 Nara
U shouldn't care what those haters think ur spelling is better than a lot of storys out there besides the criticism you mention in the authors notes, well i wouldnt have noticed those simple slip-ups don't let them get to u. Ur a great writer I think u have a lot of writing goodyness. Keep writing
U shouldn't care what those haters think ur spelling is better than a lot of storys out there besides the criticism you mention in the authors notes, well i wouldnt have noticed those simple slip-ups don't let them get to u. Ur a great writer I think u have a lot of writing goodyness. Keep writing
8/11/2011 c1 Anon
I've only read the first chapter of your story (so far), and already I think that you've made the character sound too sorry for herself. She keeps on repeating, in different ways, how her life sucks. I think that it would really improve the first part if you cut some of the "woe is me" part out.
I've only read the first chapter of your story (so far), and already I think that you've made the character sound too sorry for herself. She keeps on repeating, in different ways, how her life sucks. I think that it would really improve the first part if you cut some of the "woe is me" part out.
2/2/2011 c16 mia aurora
yup ! the image of the 2 graves is also stuck in my head :P
but i loved it ! :D
yup ! the image of the 2 graves is also stuck in my head :P
but i loved it ! :D
1/14/2011 c16 
1fairytalewriter
i just read your story and the conclusion was amazing
im all depressed now because the image of the two graves is stuck in my head
thanks for writing this and i hope publishing goes well for you
1fairytalewriteri just read your story and the conclusion was amazing
im all depressed now because the image of the two graves is stuck in my head
thanks for writing this and i hope publishing goes well for you