
1/31/2010 c16 bookaholic214
wow. that's all I can say. just wow. u did a fantastic job and I hope some day j can write as well as u can. great job, really.
wow. that's all I can say. just wow. u did a fantastic job and I hope some day j can write as well as u can. great job, really.
1/31/2010 c5 SCHATZI87
Ive been reading your story up to now, & i have to say what a crazy turn of events in chap.5 i love it. i can't wait to see what happens next. This is a great story you have a wonderful imagination. i hope your dreams come true & you are able to publish your stories. I'll definitely be waiting for more keep up the good work :D
Ive been reading your story up to now, & i have to say what a crazy turn of events in chap.5 i love it. i can't wait to see what happens next. This is a great story you have a wonderful imagination. i hope your dreams come true & you are able to publish your stories. I'll definitely be waiting for more keep up the good work :D
1/26/2010 c16 queensarah1
Oh I loved that story and it had such a good ending it has to be one of my favorites
Love
queensarah1
Oh I loved that story and it had such a good ending it has to be one of my favorites
Love
queensarah1
1/25/2010 c17 Mo- The Reviewer
O-M-G! You're going to get Knight Love published? Awesome!
Congrats!
~Mo~
O-M-G! You're going to get Knight Love published? Awesome!
Congrats!
~Mo~
1/25/2010 c17 Minti17
Really good! Please update soon! Would you beable to make the story a bit clearer :) otherwise it a great story!
Really good! Please update soon! Would you beable to make the story a bit clearer :) otherwise it a great story!
1/2/2010 c6 DA-chen1
Hihihi! Really nice.. ok, so I'm glad that Anna is not with Troy, when he hits women - that is NOT ok! ;-)
I hope, TV and Anna will make a great rebellion :-) That must be fun!
DA-chen
Hihihi! Really nice.. ok, so I'm glad that Anna is not with Troy, when he hits women - that is NOT ok! ;-)
I hope, TV and Anna will make a great rebellion :-) That must be fun!
DA-chen
1/2/2010 c2 DA-chen1
Very confusing part.. I have started to like Troy because he was so possessive at the beginning.. like he had the right to have her..? hmm- DA-chen
Very confusing part.. I have started to like Troy because he was so possessive at the beginning.. like he had the right to have her..? hmm- DA-chen
1/2/2010 c1 DA-chen1
Well, very interesting beginning. It's kind of a fantasy story? We will see ;-)
DA-chen
Well, very interesting beginning. It's kind of a fantasy story? We will see ;-)
DA-chen
12/29/2009 c16
6Masquerade hide your face
Three letters... WOW. I loved how you showed the stages of her life and I loved the ending. Very heart felt.

Three letters... WOW. I loved how you showed the stages of her life and I loved the ending. Very heart felt.
12/29/2009 c16 Aradia Cloud
Oh, God. I'm friggin crying right now. That was a bitter sweet ending. I loved this story man. I loved this so much.
Oh, God. I'm friggin crying right now. That was a bitter sweet ending. I loved this story man. I loved this so much.
12/29/2009 c15 Aradia Cloud
This mother f u c k i n story had BETTER end happy. I'm about to read the last chapter, and I feel a strong sense of foreboding.
This mother f u c k i n story had BETTER end happy. I'm about to read the last chapter, and I feel a strong sense of foreboding.
12/29/2009 c13 Aradia Cloud
Bull! What the hell is troy (I won't even capitalize his name) doing there? Isn't he, like, um, maybe, I don't know, supposed to be dead?
Bull! What the hell is troy (I won't even capitalize his name) doing there? Isn't he, like, um, maybe, I don't know, supposed to be dead?