for They Were In Love8/27/2008 c1 
10close enough to speak
i love these stories because jeff always delivers!
inconsistencies:
i think there's supposed to be a break after "mike looked up thoughtfully and then continued out the door".
in the second last line, it should be "sighed" not "signed".
"jeff refused to let dara stuff with them"... but then stays with them for three months. ?
i really like how he calls dara the "ever needy girlfriend". it makes him sound... i don't know. like jeff. like someone who is determined not to be in love with her.
10close enough to speaki love these stories because jeff always delivers!
inconsistencies:
i think there's supposed to be a break after "mike looked up thoughtfully and then continued out the door".
in the second last line, it should be "sighed" not "signed".
"jeff refused to let dara stuff with them"... but then stays with them for three months. ?
i really like how he calls dara the "ever needy girlfriend". it makes him sound... i don't know. like jeff. like someone who is determined not to be in love with her.