5/6/2009 c1 XxNeOnxLoVexX
this is EXACTLY the situation i'm in. it's like looking into a creative mirror! well done!
this is EXACTLY the situation i'm in. it's like looking into a creative mirror! well done!
9/14/2008 c1 boris still lives
that was...hot, amazingly hot. nice use of metaphors and personifications - really brought it out. more of a defined structure maybe? if its your style then thats fine as sunshine lol next chapter coming soon?
that was...hot, amazingly hot. nice use of metaphors and personifications - really brought it out. more of a defined structure maybe? if its your style then thats fine as sunshine lol next chapter coming soon?
9/2/2008 c1 7melodramatical-bratz
Hey... that was great. nw i feel so priviledged to have you reviewed my stories. with a writer like you revieweing my stories... i don't even know where to start. and it's not like i didn't want to continue them but i'm currently faced witha major writer's block. but not on shawna's part tho.
it's more like mocks are mocking me in my face. and btw your story's great as in like MAJOR great! hahahahahahahah...
I LOVE IT! and it shall go on my favourite story list which i shall do in a minute. =)
anyhoo... i'll try to post the first part of shawna's story for you. and let me know what you think. =) i'm forever in you debt. ;) i've got to dash now. accounting's humming my name softly...
YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE!
Hey... that was great. nw i feel so priviledged to have you reviewed my stories. with a writer like you revieweing my stories... i don't even know where to start. and it's not like i didn't want to continue them but i'm currently faced witha major writer's block. but not on shawna's part tho.
it's more like mocks are mocking me in my face. and btw your story's great as in like MAJOR great! hahahahahahahah...
I LOVE IT! and it shall go on my favourite story list which i shall do in a minute. =)
anyhoo... i'll try to post the first part of shawna's story for you. and let me know what you think. =) i'm forever in you debt. ;) i've got to dash now. accounting's humming my name softly...
YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE!
8/31/2008 c1 7Sub Rosa Vehement
That was beautiful. You personified unrequited love perfectly. Your writing style is amazing.
That was beautiful. You personified unrequited love perfectly. Your writing style is amazing.
8/29/2008 c1 LovingYouForever
I have one word for you: Wow.
You really, really, really summed up every exact feeling that I am having right now. I just... Wow. I'm so amazed, happy, and just... blown away. Your style, your writing... I love it. Thanks for the wonderful little one shot. It totally made my day!
-LYF
I have one word for you: Wow.
You really, really, really summed up every exact feeling that I am having right now. I just... Wow. I'm so amazed, happy, and just... blown away. Your style, your writing... I love it. Thanks for the wonderful little one shot. It totally made my day!
-LYF
8/29/2008 c1 koerle
Cute start for a story. You have managed to peak my interst and your writing style is pleasant.
I hope you can give more background information about the girl and her love interst in next chapters!
Cute start for a story. You have managed to peak my interst and your writing style is pleasant.
I hope you can give more background information about the girl and her love interst in next chapters!