
1/8/2012 c1 hayella
really cuuttteee! :)
really cuuttteee! :)
7/12/2010 c1 Ngoc1231
That's cute! I would ask for a picture at least. But eh.. I think my brain would probably not work either.. and I probably wouldn't have known who they are unless I really did like their band. I can barely keep up with the people in my school, let alone keep up with movie stars and musicians haha. Bad trait, I know.
And I do like that he kissed her. That was sweet!
~*~Ngoc1231~*~
That's cute! I would ask for a picture at least. But eh.. I think my brain would probably not work either.. and I probably wouldn't have known who they are unless I really did like their band. I can barely keep up with the people in my school, let alone keep up with movie stars and musicians haha. Bad trait, I know.
And I do like that he kissed her. That was sweet!
~*~Ngoc1231~*~
3/23/2010 c1
33FLIPPER66
I READ THIS ONE ALWHILE BACK BUT AT THE PUBLIC LIBRARY AND THEY LIMITED HOW MUCH TIME ALLOWED ON COMPUTERS SO I DIDN'T GET TO REVIEW IT THEN . ITS A VERY GOOD STORY

I READ THIS ONE ALWHILE BACK BUT AT THE PUBLIC LIBRARY AND THEY LIMITED HOW MUCH TIME ALLOWED ON COMPUTERS SO I DIDN'T GET TO REVIEW IT THEN . ITS A VERY GOOD STORY
1/2/2010 c1
10CassandraStacy
So cute! I love her line: "I hate Murphy . . ." Also how even though she's a big fan of them, she's not like a "total fan girl pyscho"
Cassandra

So cute! I love her line: "I hate Murphy . . ." Also how even though she's a big fan of them, she's not like a "total fan girl pyscho"
Cassandra
8/23/2009 c1
9Lily Llynn
Definitely crazy and unrealistic, and in need of some editing, but cute. I'm glad xoxluurve added this to our c2.

Definitely crazy and unrealistic, and in need of some editing, but cute. I'm glad xoxluurve added this to our c2.
8/7/2009 c1 Sarah Francise
You should add more to the story, i am sorry this is not so good.
You should add more to the story, i am sorry this is not so good.
10/3/2008 c1
3starlit x sky
I think this would be good as more than a one shot. But it's your choice.
Anyway, this was really cute. =]

I think this would be good as more than a one shot. But it's your choice.
Anyway, this was really cute. =]
9/10/2008 c1 Green Eyed Angel
Cute. Very cliche, way too short, but cute. Haha. Stupid fangirls. I bet that it was fun to write.
Cute. Very cliche, way too short, but cute. Haha. Stupid fangirls. I bet that it was fun to write.
9/1/2008 c1
24Ravina
Haha...I'm not going to suggest you do anything crazy for this review, but I will say that I agree with your other reviewer - KariandTK - in that I would like to see this become more than a one-shot! I seriously believe you're ready to write something longer, and I'll definitely check it out if you decide to!
That being said...Murphy's Law is one of those crazy things I live by, so I liked how you incorporated it into this.
- Rebekah
P.S. Your profile page scared me when I read you were 25 because I was pretty sure I read before that you were younger. Shame on you for scaring me! :P

Haha...I'm not going to suggest you do anything crazy for this review, but I will say that I agree with your other reviewer - KariandTK - in that I would like to see this become more than a one-shot! I seriously believe you're ready to write something longer, and I'll definitely check it out if you decide to!
That being said...Murphy's Law is one of those crazy things I live by, so I liked how you incorporated it into this.
- Rebekah
P.S. Your profile page scared me when I read you were 25 because I was pretty sure I read before that you were younger. Shame on you for scaring me! :P