
10/8/2016 c29 Guest
Lovely story!
Lovely story!
9/2/2012 c29 ZoeysZone
HEY! Knock, Knock, Knock! Anyone up there still. Were are the five more chapters you said you had left? HELLO! It's been two or so years!
HEY! Knock, Knock, Knock! Anyone up there still. Were are the five more chapters you said you had left? HELLO! It's been two or so years!
7/30/2012 c9 Preposterous
This is such a strange culture. And Connor is not the charming gentleman I thought he was at first. And I'm confused about his lover too.
This is such a strange culture. And Connor is not the charming gentleman I thought he was at first. And I'm confused about his lover too.
7/30/2012 c1 Preposterous
Nice story! I noticed one mistake though in this chapter. "They don't have room for the poverty" could better be written as "They don't have room for the poor."
Nice story! I noticed one mistake though in this chapter. "They don't have room for the poverty" could better be written as "They don't have room for the poor."
7/19/2012 c29 Taylor
please finish this story pretty pretty pretty please
please finish this story pretty pretty pretty please
7/8/2012 c29 Bubbly Girl
Amazing story! I really hope that you will finish it! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
Amazing story! I really hope that you will finish it! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
5/10/2012 c23 Guest
Yes, Ella, you lost your resolve and you fell in love. Right in front of some ten year old kid ... Lol
Yes, Ella, you lost your resolve and you fell in love. Right in front of some ten year old kid ... Lol
11/13/2010 c29
10AmericanBeauty456
I fell in love with this story from the start and I like where it has headed. I do sense that Vincent knows more than he is letting on and that his father has a lot to do with the murder of Ella's grandfather. I hope that Ella and Connor will find a way to be together in the end and that she will be able to trust him and everyone else that is on her side. PLEASE write more soon...
Love, AmericanBeauty456

I fell in love with this story from the start and I like where it has headed. I do sense that Vincent knows more than he is letting on and that his father has a lot to do with the murder of Ella's grandfather. I hope that Ella and Connor will find a way to be together in the end and that she will be able to trust him and everyone else that is on her side. PLEASE write more soon...
Love, AmericanBeauty456