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6/20/2009 c8 hezsha2013
wow...this is great...
2/15/2009 c8 Regin
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
11/24/2008 c6 1Nopotofgold
LOl, sleeping with the enemy never a good thing right?
10/30/2008 c5 Nopotofgold
That was a really good chapter. I wonder why she helped him at all though, she didn't say she would.
10/6/2008 c3 Cecilia A
You spelled deception wrong.

there is still some time period clash, like you use the phrase 'piss off' but that is a more recent phrase, so you should come up with something more in the time period you are aiming for. But, anyway,

THAT WAS AWESOME! I loved it! Write more PLEASE! I really really really REALLY want to know what happens next.

Semina
10/6/2008 c2 Jo
The story gets more interesting by every chapter I read! Good work, I'm anxious to see what happens next.
10/5/2008 c2 Cecilia A
THAT is one of the best stories I have read on this site. I loved it.

You have a few errors in tense and spelling. I'm also confused about the time period. There are just a couple small things that suggest that it is in modern times, but most of it suggests the time period you are probably aiming for. Other than that, you have an awesome story. I added it to my favorites :)

Semina
10/5/2008 c2 pinkeclipse
what can that mean?
9/12/2008 c1 Jo
I love it! Can't wait for more.
8/30/2008 c1 1brokenshardsofeternity
me likey this story, great start!
8/30/2008 c1 1Nopotofgold
Drakil? Intresting, I hope you are planing on continuing the story.

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