for she did believe8/30/2008 c1 
1Kneecap
I don't understand why you used '&' instead of 'and' and why the punctuation was so scattered, along with a lack of capitalisation?
Anyway, it was quite nice. I won't say I was moved or anything because it was just too short to have a strong enough effect, but I liked the spin on the fairy tale.
Nice work ^^.
1KneecapI don't understand why you used '&' instead of 'and' and why the punctuation was so scattered, along with a lack of capitalisation?
Anyway, it was quite nice. I won't say I was moved or anything because it was just too short to have a strong enough effect, but I liked the spin on the fairy tale.
Nice work ^^.
8/30/2008 c1 sunsetting
mm, i'm not sure if this should be in the poetry section or not (but would what i know, i'm not a poet), but i liked it. the last two lines were made of win; the first line brought it all together. uh, i like this perspective. not everything has to be like it seems, anyways.
but yeah, i'll shut up now before i sound like i know what i'm talking about.
i really do like this.
mm, i'm not sure if this should be in the poetry section or not (but would what i know, i'm not a poet), but i liked it. the last two lines were made of win; the first line brought it all together. uh, i like this perspective. not everything has to be like it seems, anyways.
but yeah, i'll shut up now before i sound like i know what i'm talking about.
i really do like this.