for The Beginning8/14/2010 c1 
1theillusiveman
good one!... and it just give me some thoughts to write on something too... and yes, it's really simple. Love the way you have used individual lines to express thoughts, rather than paragraphs...
1theillusivemangood one!... and it just give me some thoughts to write on something too... and yes, it's really simple. Love the way you have used individual lines to express thoughts, rather than paragraphs...
10/5/2008 c1 May Elizabeth
I love this. ^^ Though I do think this makes a good story beginning. Just a suggestion. Peace.
I love this. ^^ Though I do think this makes a good story beginning. Just a suggestion. Peace.
10/4/2008 c1 50Kristina Suko
Hmnm. Cute. I like the last line, because it's so true. A hello is all it takes to begin a friendship.
By the way, if you like dark romances, my story "Blood for a Rose" is on the darker side. So if you're ever bored with nothing to read, stop by :)
~Maranwe
50Kristina SukoHmnm. Cute. I like the last line, because it's so true. A hello is all it takes to begin a friendship.
By the way, if you like dark romances, my story "Blood for a Rose" is on the darker side. So if you're ever bored with nothing to read, stop by :)
~Maranwe
10/3/2008 c1 Unknown Survivor
Nicely done. I can relate to some degree. Keep up the good work. (:
p.s. thanks for the reviews.
~Unknown Survivor~
Nicely done. I can relate to some degree. Keep up the good work. (:
p.s. thanks for the reviews.
~Unknown Survivor~