for Horrible Mistake6/27/2016 c1 Penny the Writer
I think this was the most beautiful story I have ever read, why did you you stop writing.
I think this was the most beautiful story I have ever read, why did you you stop writing.
6/27/2016 c1 Faith
Beautiful...
Beautiful...
12/19/2012 c1 absentmindedprof
Beautiful. Passionate and melancholy and heart-wrenchingly beautiful. :)
Beautiful. Passionate and melancholy and heart-wrenchingly beautiful. :)
10/22/2012 c1 
18FreekyDisaster18
This is amazing! Beautifully short with flawless writing that keeps the reader hooked with every word. Fantastic.
18FreekyDisaster18This is amazing! Beautifully short with flawless writing that keeps the reader hooked with every word. Fantastic.
10/20/2012 c1 3fellintothemoon
Hey there, babe! Horrible Mistake has been added to the ADoR archive under the One Shot section. Here's your review:
Melissa Thinks: The definition of short and bitter-sweet, Horrible Mistake by Penelope P. definitely lives up to the reputation this well written author has made for herself. It's a simple, yet complex, one shot that explores the true nature of good and evil. It's compact; packing a powerful punch to those who read it. Not only does the premise stray from the cliched angel/demon stories, but it leaves much to the reader's imagination: what happened before this beautiful scene took place? What are the specifics of this complex relationship our two main characters share? What strange world do these creatures live in? And most importantly, what happens next?
3fellintothemoonHey there, babe! Horrible Mistake has been added to the ADoR archive under the One Shot section. Here's your review:
Melissa Thinks: The definition of short and bitter-sweet, Horrible Mistake by Penelope P. definitely lives up to the reputation this well written author has made for herself. It's a simple, yet complex, one shot that explores the true nature of good and evil. It's compact; packing a powerful punch to those who read it. Not only does the premise stray from the cliched angel/demon stories, but it leaves much to the reader's imagination: what happened before this beautiful scene took place? What are the specifics of this complex relationship our two main characters share? What strange world do these creatures live in? And most importantly, what happens next?
4/29/2012 c1 8burn321
Okay this was sad, and amazing at the same time, I wish There was more of this story I could read! I really like this one! It's cute but not cute. Okay well more to read, ttyl
8burn321Okay this was sad, and amazing at the same time, I wish There was more of this story I could read! I really like this one! It's cute but not cute. Okay well more to read, ttyl
2/21/2012 c1 Black Wolf Fang
this is a touching story. I really like it. :)
this is a touching story. I really like it. :)
2/6/2011 c1 5ILveJcb
Wow! Oh, man! That is amazing! Why the hell is it a one shot? This story deserves to be told! I want to know more! Aw! I love it! Is there any chance that you'll write more? Please say yes...
5ILveJcbWow! Oh, man! That is amazing! Why the hell is it a one shot? This story deserves to be told! I want to know more! Aw! I love it! Is there any chance that you'll write more? Please say yes...
7/5/2010 c1 1Natasha Dust
Ouch! That was beautifully sad and heartbreaking... an Angel who loved the Devil even at the last moment as he killed her and enjoyed it with all his being... *cries*
Too bad he was late to realize just how much he actually loved her... :(
1Natasha DustOuch! That was beautifully sad and heartbreaking... an Angel who loved the Devil even at the last moment as he killed her and enjoyed it with all his being... *cries*
Too bad he was late to realize just how much he actually loved her... :(
6/20/2010 c1 5I Murder on Impulse
I love this story so much. It never fails to make my heart ache.
xx
Ali
5I Murder on ImpulseI love this story so much. It never fails to make my heart ache.
xx
Ali