
9/2/2008 c1
495mate.feed.kill.repeat
I try to think of something to say for everything that I read, but this one is hard for me to come up with something.
Your lines flow easily and you used the haiku set up really well. Your line breaks weren't awkward like a lot of other haikus I've read.
I don't think the title does tihs piece justice, though. I bet you have your own reasons and everything for it but the title is so light-hearted and sarcastic and then the piece itself is the exact opposite.
-stix-

I try to think of something to say for everything that I read, but this one is hard for me to come up with something.
Your lines flow easily and you used the haiku set up really well. Your line breaks weren't awkward like a lot of other haikus I've read.
I don't think the title does tihs piece justice, though. I bet you have your own reasons and everything for it but the title is so light-hearted and sarcastic and then the piece itself is the exact opposite.
-stix-