
5/17/2011 c6 Hey
This was cute. You ought to update. A year later, for old time's sake maybe? XD
This was cute. You ought to update. A year later, for old time's sake maybe? XD
11/2/2009 c5 Eloquent Catastrophe
These are really interesting! The concept is really cool. I don't think I'd have the patience for it, haha. Your ability to tell a story in 100 words is admirable. Are you writing more? I'm looking forward to another :)
These are really interesting! The concept is really cool. I don't think I'd have the patience for it, haha. Your ability to tell a story in 100 words is admirable. Are you writing more? I'm looking forward to another :)
3/22/2009 c5
22The Sham
Woo Dan! 8D
Melikes them both. ;D
You rock hardcore, you handsome son of a beast.
ilu
*inserts love here*
xo
Chad

Woo Dan! 8D
Melikes them both. ;D
You rock hardcore, you handsome son of a beast.
ilu
*inserts love here*
xo
Chad
3/22/2009 c5
4SerialXLain
God. I'm in an emo mood right now and for some reason "Was he afraid? Everything was so calm." made me burst into tears and I don't even know why. I just really fucking love those two sentences though...
...And Emilia creeps me out.

God. I'm in an emo mood right now and for some reason "Was he afraid? Everything was so calm." made me burst into tears and I don't even know why. I just really fucking love those two sentences though...
...And Emilia creeps me out.
3/3/2009 c4 teethandlungs
; o ; i'm so glad you posted it! it's happy :) AND it's wonderfully written, dan, so i don't know what you were freaking out about. the last line leaves us with a fuzzy-free type of feeling. i dig it.
; o ; i'm so glad you posted it! it's happy :) AND it's wonderfully written, dan, so i don't know what you were freaking out about. the last line leaves us with a fuzzy-free type of feeling. i dig it.
2/25/2009 c1
1Saint Savvy
I love these! So poignant.
I think I'd like to try - it's a nice little exercise.

I love these! So poignant.
I think I'd like to try - it's a nice little exercise.
10/24/2008 c3 teethandlungs
Is it bad that I don't really think it was an accident?
Though if it was truly just an accident, then that really blows, because she's never going to convince the psychiatrist.
I really like these 100-word shorts you write. I wonder what the next word will be? :o
Is it bad that I don't really think it was an accident?
Though if it was truly just an accident, then that really blows, because she's never going to convince the psychiatrist.
I really like these 100-word shorts you write. I wonder what the next word will be? :o
10/22/2008 c3
4SerialXLain
So is Michelle being a liar or is the psychiatrist just stupid? D: Because Michelle seems like an unreliable narrator. I'm not sure if I want to trust the chick who's talking to the crazy-doctor.
Or is it left ambiguous on purpose to make people like me go HUH?
Either way - I like. :3

So is Michelle being a liar or is the psychiatrist just stupid? D: Because Michelle seems like an unreliable narrator. I'm not sure if I want to trust the chick who's talking to the crazy-doctor.
Or is it left ambiguous on purpose to make people like me go HUH?
Either way - I like. :3
9/8/2008 c2 teethandlungs
D'aw what a cute idea. :) I couldn't really get a gist of how well these two know each other but I guess that's to be expected when you can only use 100 words. I like it
D'aw what a cute idea. :) I couldn't really get a gist of how well these two know each other but I guess that's to be expected when you can only use 100 words. I like it
9/8/2008 c1 teethandlungs
Ooh wiping the blood off on the other guy's pants and not his own was a very nice touch. I take it a big asshole just got a dose of his own medicine. Good :)
Ooh wiping the blood off on the other guy's pants and not his own was a very nice touch. I take it a big asshole just got a dose of his own medicine. Good :)