
8/4/2011 c4 Glockette
this was great! much better than any of the young adults novels i've read recently. do you have plans to update this?
('tis HopelessMine from FF.net BTW ^^ - i told you i would check out your other work, and here i am :)
this was great! much better than any of the young adults novels i've read recently. do you have plans to update this?
('tis HopelessMine from FF.net BTW ^^ - i told you i would check out your other work, and here i am :)
8/23/2009 c4
9Lexodus
This is really really good (I found it after reading LLO for the third time :D) and I can't wait for more! No, really. I start college in ten days :S
Anyway, may I humbly request an update as soon as humanly possible, or would that be too forward of me?

This is really really good (I found it after reading LLO for the third time :D) and I can't wait for more! No, really. I start college in ten days :S
Anyway, may I humbly request an update as soon as humanly possible, or would that be too forward of me?
2/18/2009 c4
13blurrylights
Interconnection of stories! YA! I feel so smart right now. And I didn't even do anything. :)
Update soon!

Interconnection of stories! YA! I feel so smart right now. And I didn't even do anything. :)
Update soon!
12/3/2008 c1 nancy
I loved A little less obvious and i cant wait to start reading this one please update soon!
I loved A little less obvious and i cant wait to start reading this one please update soon!
10/9/2008 c3
2Amberlicious
Is LLO a real band? I cant find their music anywhere!
Anyway. this is so awesome too.
Jack is so cute. And Skylar is cool.
Jazzlyn is a sweetie. and the mom is a b"§"§§$
You need to update woman! (i hope you are a girl otherwise i sound extremely stupid)
Amber

Is LLO a real band? I cant find their music anywhere!
Anyway. this is so awesome too.
Jack is so cute. And Skylar is cool.
Jazzlyn is a sweetie. and the mom is a b"§"§§$
You need to update woman! (i hope you are a girl otherwise i sound extremely stupid)
Amber
10/5/2008 c1 Hoodfabulous
My god, I love this kind of storyline. The writing style isn't bad either. So keep the chapters rolling, babe! Pretty please.
My god, I love this kind of storyline. The writing style isn't bad either. So keep the chapters rolling, babe! Pretty please.
10/5/2008 c3
13blurrylights
Jazz is such a sweetheart...i absolutely adore her! And Jack is so nice to her. He does have a heart. Stephanie is mean...i'm sticking my tonge out at her. This was a great chapter! Update soon...:)

Jazz is such a sweetheart...i absolutely adore her! And Jack is so nice to her. He does have a heart. Stephanie is mean...i'm sticking my tonge out at her. This was a great chapter! Update soon...:)
9/28/2008 c2 Xiaolu
I like this one, too. :) It's nice to find Rochelle in there. :)
And Jack is funny and it's fun that he's going to try again. Good luck buddy! ;)
I like this one, too. :) It's nice to find Rochelle in there. :)
And Jack is funny and it's fun that he's going to try again. Good luck buddy! ;)
9/11/2008 c2 Chihara-san
I love the plot of this story, and I love how the band, Little Less Obvious, is in here, and even Rochelle. :)
I love the plot of this story, and I love how the band, Little Less Obvious, is in here, and even Rochelle. :)