for How to Dance9/26/2010 c12 berndi
This was adorable. The voice of Lizzy you had going was really strong - she was an interesting character whom I could easily read more about. So thanks for that :)
This was adorable. The voice of Lizzy you had going was really strong - she was an interesting character whom I could easily read more about. So thanks for that :)
3/21/2010 c5 indijana
I absolutely love this story! But I'm a bit confused, I thought Liz was 'out' at school, so why is she all of a sudden afraid of what people might think in this chapter?
I absolutely love this story! But I'm a bit confused, I thought Liz was 'out' at school, so why is she all of a sudden afraid of what people might think in this chapter?
1/14/2010 c12 Charlie
Cute story, if unresolved and adorable ending, if only somewhat resolved. Overall A.
Cute story, if unresolved and adorable ending, if only somewhat resolved. Overall A.
10/10/2009 c11 
16Naa
so i know that you're probably foot over elbow with college blah but i just wanted to let you know that i really like your characters, i really like your story, and i really like your style
update, please?
16Naaso i know that you're probably foot over elbow with college blah but i just wanted to let you know that i really like your characters, i really like your story, and i really like your style
update, please?
7/16/2009 c10 3whildchild
Heya Darling!
Another great chapter as per usual! :D
Aw... Its ending? Ah well...
Smiles
whildchild
3whildchildHeya Darling!
Another great chapter as per usual! :D
Aw... Its ending? Ah well...
Smiles
whildchild
7/6/2009 c9 whildchild
Whot! Update! *happy dances* Great chapter, nice to see the continuation!
:D
Smiles
Whot! Update! *happy dances* Great chapter, nice to see the continuation!
:D
Smiles
3/14/2009 c8 flies.like.decay
Noo! Noo! I finally catch up only to discover that there isn't a kissing scene? Dammit! They must kiss! But anyway, I just wondered why Liz said she had to babysit her kid siblings when Hannah was supposed to be with the mother...
Noo! Noo! I finally catch up only to discover that there isn't a kissing scene? Dammit! They must kiss! But anyway, I just wondered why Liz said she had to babysit her kid siblings when Hannah was supposed to be with the mother...
12/4/2008 c8 Ria
Hi. I love your story so far. =D Liz is adorable.
Hi. I love your story so far. =D Liz is adorable.
9/23/2008 c7 4Jasper Lupione
... I always talk like a pirate ... (I am a pirate =])
I can see what you mean, this chapter is a little fluffy, but enjoyable nethertheless.
"Jess grinned. "As dreamy as it sounds, waltzing down Main Street, I kind of figured you wouldn't want an audience."
"Oh. Point."
Best bit. Hands down.
4Jasper Lupione... I always talk like a pirate ... (I am a pirate =])
I can see what you mean, this chapter is a little fluffy, but enjoyable nethertheless.
"Jess grinned. "As dreamy as it sounds, waltzing down Main Street, I kind of figured you wouldn't want an audience."
"Oh. Point."
Best bit. Hands down.
9/22/2008 c6 Jasper Lupione
Oh dear. This is going to be dramatic. I can totally feel it in me bones.
Oh dear. This is going to be dramatic. I can totally feel it in me bones.
9/21/2008 c5 2XxMadHatterxX
david HAS to be gay...
haha sry but that's just the only thing i see coming
love this story gahh
2XxMadHatterxXdavid HAS to be gay...
haha sry but that's just the only thing i see coming
love this story gahh
9/20/2008 c5 Ace
You are doing such a good job with this story! Keep it up!
You are doing such a good job with this story! Keep it up!
9/18/2008 c5 4Jasper Lupione
!
I really liked this chapter. I was kind of half wondering when thee whole Jess-being-in-the-therapy-group would come up. I'd bet... low self esteem, or maybe a guilt issue?
(ifyouwanti'lldesigntheirpromdresses=])
4Jasper Lupione!
I really liked this chapter. I was kind of half wondering when thee whole Jess-being-in-the-therapy-group would come up. I'd bet... low self esteem, or maybe a guilt issue?
(ifyouwanti'lldesigntheirpromdresses=])
9/14/2008 c4 Jasper Lupione
I'm getting quietly addicted to this story =]
I love the way it's so realistic, and I did NOT see the David thing coming. I think you portrayed the mum and Liz's reaction to the knives really well.
Out of interest, are you using American or English spellings?
I'm getting quietly addicted to this story =]
I love the way it's so realistic, and I did NOT see the David thing coming. I think you portrayed the mum and Liz's reaction to the knives really well.
Out of interest, are you using American or English spellings?