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7/3/2016 c5 7IcanzIIravor
Great story. I'm sad I didn't catch it before you discontinued the story:(
12/9/2008 c1 NoInferio
Ladies and gentlemen! This is the moment you've all been waiting for...we now present the award for the category of "Most Retarded Review Left by a Person Who Obviously Thinks Very Much of Themselves (Even Though They Have Shit Taste as Evidenced by Their Profile)" to Kerophile!


Oh! What is this? What a surprise! Kerophile has also received an honorary "Wow, This Person Really Thinks They're Funny (That's So Sad)" award! This is truly an amazing moment, folks. Kerophile is sweeping up the awards tonight. We are witnessing history in the making.

Seriously though, don't act like a d-bag. If you didn't like the story, leave a constructive review and move on. And get off your frickin' high horse. You're not as cool as you think you are. You sound like an idiot and you probably are one, and you're not even funny. I bet the review you originally wrote was not even anywhere close to awesome. Sorry to burst your big-headed bubble. Go cry a river. And enjoy your awards! You totally deserved them. =)

To this requires pants:

Please continue with your story and updating! I like your writing and I think there's great potential with what you have here. There will always be naysayers who have nothing of substance to say, but they continue to be negative because they live a miserable existence and want to spread the "joy." By the way, jealousy is an awful shade on you, Kerophile. Continue with the writing, dear author, and I will continue with my words of encouragement!
12/7/2008 c5 2Zadien

Ok, so on to your story. I like this. I do adore Nat and he's so refreshing. He's not full of teen angst - helps that he's not a teen - and he's no dominating or oppressive which makes for a nice change in the romance section of FP. And I can't wait to see more and more of Charlie's personality. It's hard to stand out when you have someone like Max who hogs the limelight but again, that's realistic. You get people who don't want to be centre stage and those who do. So again I enjoyed this and I want to read more when you're not so bogged down in work and screen writing because honestly, hearing about your homework makes me nervous, lol. Hope to read more.
11/29/2008 c1 2Kerophile
Shit. I wrote a really fucking good review. Not to say the review looked positively upon your vapid piece of... whatever the fuck this is, I don't know what to call shit anymore - literature... work or literature, whatever - but I wrote it and it was worth two cents and... now I can't remember what it was because my computer came equipped with genital herpes and two sets of ovaries.

I think it said something like, "The plot is flat, the characters are flat, it's the first chapter and I read the reviews first and expected to fall in love with its amazingness and Nat's coolness but there was NOTHING when I was done with it and I tried to find it in the next chapter but I couldn't get through such insipid banality..." or something to that effect. For all intents and purposes, it said, "I hate this so fucking much I can't even give it a fighting chance."

Nat - typical.

Sam - typical.

Charlie - typical.

Max - slutypical.

Nat's mother - fucking typical.

Plot - ded plot is ded.

As a writer, I mourn. As an asshole, I do this. (Hint, hint: this isn't a flame, just very fucking brash [and vulgar, it may appear] frustration manifesting itself in the form of... hell, I don't know, fucking fustration. Heheh. c:)
11/1/2008 c5 2ValSilph
Wow, I love this story! So glad I found it :D

Nat is amazing O_O And even though this is supposedly a "old cliche" it's still amazing and new. :) Please, please, please update soon!
10/31/2008 c5 NoInferio
Love this story! Please update every chance you get!

I'm such a fan of how you've written the conversations between the characters - it all flows so well and so naturally. Great job! Also, I like the pacing of the story It's slow, but is perfect for the way the plot's going.

And I guess it doesn't hurt that Nat's personality is very much like my boyfriend's. =) Not biased. I swear.
10/30/2008 c5 6sooner or later its over
her reaction and his reaction to the picture was so sweet :)

god i love this story :)
10/6/2008 c4 sooner or later its over
i like how shy nat is and Charlie's response to nat wanting to sketch her.
10/5/2008 c4 6ObliviousLady
I don't really have anything helpful to say but I'm enjoying this so far.
10/5/2008 c4 Zadien
I love that last line. It's so good and the whole scene where he's drawing her, very hot. Mostly I just like Nat. He just amuses me and it's nice to see some action between him and Charlie. Update again soon.
10/4/2008 c3 Zadien
I feel bad not reviewing this earlier, especially since it was dedicated to me which was oh so nice and made me feel warm and fuzzy and yet guilt ridden for being bad at the reviewing thing.

Aw I forgot how cute the twins are. They're so adamant about what food they want until Nat throws another one in there and suddenly it's all about the hotdogs. Lol, it still makes me laugh to read about their views on whether Nat is, in fact, a boy or not. It's already up for debate due to his name, lol. Can't wait to see Nessie.

Anyways, write more -though I know you're doing that now- and hopefully FP will have its act together and I'll be able to review on time.

Gemz =D
9/18/2008 c1 4A. J. Manders
Haha...I like the two twins. Reminds me of my neice. You portrayed their crazyness quite well. :D

Can't wait to read what may or may not happen between Nat and Charlie...
9/18/2008 c2 6sooner or later its over
ha ha I'd be a morning person to if i had that lovely display :)
9/14/2008 c2 5KatieTheWriter
“Well fuck. I think I’ve just converted to morning personism."

HAHAHAHA. That was the best ending line ever!

Okay, so this chapter was amazing. I loved all the details and it was a good length. I think Max is hilarious. And I love how you make the girls so real. Like how they speak to one another and call each other names but they don't get angry about it. I call my sister a hooker, but not in a mean way. LOL it's a loving sentiment.

Great job! Please post some more soon. This is one of my new favorites.

Katie :)
9/12/2008 c2 9andee lee
Haha, I love Max - that last line was hilarious. :-)

It's going to be interesting to see how things play out. I love your descriptions and how all three of the girls have totally different personalities.

I'm looking forward to more!

-Andee :-)
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