
5/30/2009 c1 Emilea
THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST! :D I love this story so so much! It's so wonderfully meant-to-be the greatest love story of all time!
THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST! :D I love this story so so much! It's so wonderfully meant-to-be the greatest love story of all time!
5/29/2009 c7
1funnechick
So, I just started reading this and I absolutely love it. I love the two main characters and their backgrounds...though I'm still curious about the misunderstanding that led Vincent to abandon their friendship and why Rosalind's mother just pulled her out of the ball so abruptly.

So, I just started reading this and I absolutely love it. I love the two main characters and their backgrounds...though I'm still curious about the misunderstanding that led Vincent to abandon their friendship and why Rosalind's mother just pulled her out of the ball so abruptly.
5/21/2009 c7 OdairBear
Aw. This was a cute chapter.
But It's sad that they didn't get dance.
I really like Vincent. Him punching Riley in the face was pretty amusing!
Update soon!
Aw. This was a cute chapter.
But It's sad that they didn't get dance.
I really like Vincent. Him punching Riley in the face was pretty amusing!
Update soon!
5/21/2009 c7 cordqueen
Poor Rosalind... can't even make a comment to her sister without it getting thrown back in her face. I really do enjoy this story and I am so glad that Vincent is standing up for her. :)
Poor Rosalind... can't even make a comment to her sister without it getting thrown back in her face. I really do enjoy this story and I am so glad that Vincent is standing up for her. :)
5/21/2009 c7
12elisefey
Excellent, excellent chapter. I know I haven't reviewed in ages, but the events of this installment got me so excited that I felt compelled to review. Good pacing, good dialog, nice narrative, and the ending was absolutely perfect with Vincent's composure and Rosalind's complete ignorance and discomfiture. Loved it.

Excellent, excellent chapter. I know I haven't reviewed in ages, but the events of this installment got me so excited that I felt compelled to review. Good pacing, good dialog, nice narrative, and the ending was absolutely perfect with Vincent's composure and Rosalind's complete ignorance and discomfiture. Loved it.
5/21/2009 c7 Klebs
What the hell just happened?
Did they start to shun her from society
or something? Did something happen to her
face? OMG! The suspense is just killing me.
I know you take ages to write your chapters
because they need brilliance- which you pull
off well- but please give us some sort of clue!
My God!
What the hell just happened?
Did they start to shun her from society
or something? Did something happen to her
face? OMG! The suspense is just killing me.
I know you take ages to write your chapters
because they need brilliance- which you pull
off well- but please give us some sort of clue!
My God!
5/21/2009 c7
7Randomisation
rosalind is still thinking christina should be with vincent...she seriously has a blind spot. I really like this chapter :D The gossip pages didn't quite report what riley said afterwards - is rosalind ever going to find out? can't wait for the next chapter :D

rosalind is still thinking christina should be with vincent...she seriously has a blind spot. I really like this chapter :D The gossip pages didn't quite report what riley said afterwards - is rosalind ever going to find out? can't wait for the next chapter :D
5/21/2009 c7 Kjersti
Stupid gossips. Always seeking to laugh at others' misfortune.
Good chapter. Although, I'm a bit nervous of what her parents want to talk to her about...
Can't wait to read more! :)
Stupid gossips. Always seeking to laugh at others' misfortune.
Good chapter. Although, I'm a bit nervous of what her parents want to talk to her about...
Can't wait to read more! :)
5/20/2009 c7
8pattEcake
This story is.. with no other words to describe it, beautiful. The words, the style, the characters, the theme, the plot, the time, the place... everything. It is so beautiful, that I could not, so to speak, put it down! I had to continue reading, and I do so hope that you will update it soon. Now, because of your elegant and greatly written story, I will most likely start spewing words of Shakespeare. Or something of the like. I already seem to be.. ereth.. typing with much better grammar and language then I normally do. I believe you fantastic author abilities have put this curse onto me, but, alas, it does not anger me in the least. In fact, it is quite the opposite. I find it very amusing that my words have changed to a much better tone, with very impeccable writing. Furthermore, I thank you for giving this website such a story that it has never seen. Also, I smile upon your gracious literature which you have given me to read. It seems I am repeating myself, though, but I cannot stop my fingers. They will do what they wish, and to no avail is my trying to stop them. So I will continue to type until it seems as if no one could read this long and ever so boring review without snoring. I do so hope that the typing exploit you have placed on my fingers is not wearing off. I do not believe exploit is the right word for that sentence, but I do not wish to go back and change it. Alas, I am quite lazy, which is really not a good attribute for a woman of my stature. Meaning 5'0. Not very tall, if you ask anyone. As is to be expected. That is all fine and good, though, because I am at the mere age of 13, since yesterday. Such a fine morn that was, becoming a teenager after hardly doing anything to deserve it. Except living, that is. I wonder if you have read this far. If you have, I truly applaud you and wish you well. If not, well, then it shall not matter anyway because you will not know of what I am writing. This review seems a fantastic piece of literature, itself. Maybe I should think about publishing it. But, oh dear! I have used almost three thousand characters! Silly, silly me. It is the longest and best review I have ever made. Well, I ought to be off to sleep, now. For I have classes in the morning, and unless I am lucky enough to get a fairly bad cold during the night, I should have to attend them. Excuse my absence, I beg of you, for I very much hope you respect me as much as I respect you. From your amazing piece, of course. I shall add both your story and you to my list of favorites. Tata, my dear! Please update frequently and well, for this admirer shall be waiting.
Hooked (truly!),
Mari

This story is.. with no other words to describe it, beautiful. The words, the style, the characters, the theme, the plot, the time, the place... everything. It is so beautiful, that I could not, so to speak, put it down! I had to continue reading, and I do so hope that you will update it soon. Now, because of your elegant and greatly written story, I will most likely start spewing words of Shakespeare. Or something of the like. I already seem to be.. ereth.. typing with much better grammar and language then I normally do. I believe you fantastic author abilities have put this curse onto me, but, alas, it does not anger me in the least. In fact, it is quite the opposite. I find it very amusing that my words have changed to a much better tone, with very impeccable writing. Furthermore, I thank you for giving this website such a story that it has never seen. Also, I smile upon your gracious literature which you have given me to read. It seems I am repeating myself, though, but I cannot stop my fingers. They will do what they wish, and to no avail is my trying to stop them. So I will continue to type until it seems as if no one could read this long and ever so boring review without snoring. I do so hope that the typing exploit you have placed on my fingers is not wearing off. I do not believe exploit is the right word for that sentence, but I do not wish to go back and change it. Alas, I am quite lazy, which is really not a good attribute for a woman of my stature. Meaning 5'0. Not very tall, if you ask anyone. As is to be expected. That is all fine and good, though, because I am at the mere age of 13, since yesterday. Such a fine morn that was, becoming a teenager after hardly doing anything to deserve it. Except living, that is. I wonder if you have read this far. If you have, I truly applaud you and wish you well. If not, well, then it shall not matter anyway because you will not know of what I am writing. This review seems a fantastic piece of literature, itself. Maybe I should think about publishing it. But, oh dear! I have used almost three thousand characters! Silly, silly me. It is the longest and best review I have ever made. Well, I ought to be off to sleep, now. For I have classes in the morning, and unless I am lucky enough to get a fairly bad cold during the night, I should have to attend them. Excuse my absence, I beg of you, for I very much hope you respect me as much as I respect you. From your amazing piece, of course. I shall add both your story and you to my list of favorites. Tata, my dear! Please update frequently and well, for this admirer shall be waiting.
Hooked (truly!),
Mari
5/14/2009 c6
1DuchessYappingDog
Wow, that was kind of sudden. I wonder how long it will take him to convince her that he doesn't hate her guts.

Wow, that was kind of sudden. I wonder how long it will take him to convince her that he doesn't hate her guts.
5/7/2009 c6 LethargicLove
I am so curious about their falling out! And now I'm happy that Vin has accepted his feelings! Now it's time to win over our heroine and stop her from attempting to be a matchmaker!
I am so curious about their falling out! And now I'm happy that Vin has accepted his feelings! Now it's time to win over our heroine and stop her from attempting to be a matchmaker!
5/7/2009 c6
4Lady Katreina
Wot! Good job!
I'm glad he finally realized it, she certainly was no help, even if she KNEW she likes him.
Thank you.

Wot! Good job!
I'm glad he finally realized it, she certainly was no help, even if she KNEW she likes him.
Thank you.