12/2/2016 c1 9sillybooklover1724
Yeah! I could feel the urge!
Well overall I could say is that it is really SUPERRB!"
Keep up your great work!
Yeah! I could feel the urge!
Well overall I could say is that it is really SUPERRB!"
Keep up your great work!
11/30/2008 c1 4B. J. Winters
I nice sentimental story. I liked the repeating theme and how it ends with dialogue. Enjoyable read.
I nice sentimental story. I liked the repeating theme and how it ends with dialogue. Enjoyable read.
9/7/2008 c1 1TinyMusicalShore
This reminds me of awaitinglove's piece, and it is one of my favorite FictionPress stories.
I already know I am going to love it. I love everything you write, so please, Don't ever stop writing.
This reminds me of awaitinglove's piece, and it is one of my favorite FictionPress stories.
I already know I am going to love it. I love everything you write, so please, Don't ever stop writing.
9/6/2008 c1 20xxTunstall Chickxx
Loved. It. I really felt it, and there was just something very poetic about it all. Very, very nicely done. Great work, hope to read from you again soon.
Keep Writing,
xxTunstall Chickxx
Loved. It. I really felt it, and there was just something very poetic about it all. Very, very nicely done. Great work, hope to read from you again soon.
Keep Writing,
xxTunstall Chickxx
9/6/2008 c1 20Silver Night
Good job expressing the heart-wrenching pain she was going through!
You used the wrong "your" sometimes though.
But overall, good story =)
Good job expressing the heart-wrenching pain she was going through!
You used the wrong "your" sometimes though.
But overall, good story =)