for The End of Fayt5/27/2009 c1 Anon
Wow! I just found this story and thought it was amazing. I couldn't stop reading! I loved the personalities and details that you put into the characters. The plot was very nice and flowed well. I loved it all! Thank you for sharing this!
Wow! I just found this story and thought it was amazing. I couldn't stop reading! I loved the personalities and details that you put into the characters. The plot was very nice and flowed well. I loved it all! Thank you for sharing this!
4/21/2009 c1 
8The-Camster
O.O Shiny dragons... *sques* Love it! So cute, Fayt was my fav... or Emory and Brandt, they were cool. I wouldn't be able to drag out some drabbles from you for this story, would I? *puppy eyes* Some sort of epilogue type thing... maybe, please?
I love this one! ^_^ *glomps*
Keep On Writing!
~The-Camster
8The-CamsterO.O Shiny dragons... *sques* Love it! So cute, Fayt was my fav... or Emory and Brandt, they were cool. I wouldn't be able to drag out some drabbles from you for this story, would I? *puppy eyes* Some sort of epilogue type thing... maybe, please?
I love this one! ^_^ *glomps*
Keep On Writing!
~The-Camster
11/10/2008 c1 11Torn and Tattered
Have I really never reviewed this? That is so weird. I have to tell you. I've read it so many times that I guess I just do that without thinking. I swear i thought i reviewed... guess either my server glitched again or I dreamed about doing it. (how weird would that be right?)
Hehe, well *sighs* you know i love this story; that doesn't even have to be said. I kinda agree with the one reviewer a little while back in saying that the whole thing with Dren and Eren didn't appeal to me. It almost... disturbs me... in an odd way. I don't know really how I feel about it.
Anyway. I think i just reread this for the 10th time. I still have yet to tell you about the idea i stole. hehe. I plan to write more on it soon, but i've accidentally obsessed myself with a few things.
Whops.
So like me right? X3 Yeah. Obviously.
Well. I'll talk to you soon. Like... tonight. Right? Maybe. i hope.
11Torn and TatteredHave I really never reviewed this? That is so weird. I have to tell you. I've read it so many times that I guess I just do that without thinking. I swear i thought i reviewed... guess either my server glitched again or I dreamed about doing it. (how weird would that be right?)
Hehe, well *sighs* you know i love this story; that doesn't even have to be said. I kinda agree with the one reviewer a little while back in saying that the whole thing with Dren and Eren didn't appeal to me. It almost... disturbs me... in an odd way. I don't know really how I feel about it.
Anyway. I think i just reread this for the 10th time. I still have yet to tell you about the idea i stole. hehe. I plan to write more on it soon, but i've accidentally obsessed myself with a few things.
Whops.
So like me right? X3 Yeah. Obviously.
Well. I'll talk to you soon. Like... tonight. Right? Maybe. i hope.
10/28/2008 c1 Roya7
Hello,
I just finished reading this fic and I have to tell you! You could have easily make it to a few chapters! First I started reading and told myself that ok it wouldn't take too long and you could go back to your works and ...
and I end up reading this the whole day! :p
Really it was too long! but hey no complains! I actually loves it! :D the perspective you made of dragons and all, the characters, the storyline, I liked everything about this!I just wanted to see Fayt a little be stronger, I mean his personality! especially in the beginning of the story!
Everything else was perfect! ;) and I really enjoy reading this!
Thanks for sharing! ^_^
Hello,
I just finished reading this fic and I have to tell you! You could have easily make it to a few chapters! First I started reading and told myself that ok it wouldn't take too long and you could go back to your works and ...
and I end up reading this the whole day! :p
Really it was too long! but hey no complains! I actually loves it! :D the perspective you made of dragons and all, the characters, the storyline, I liked everything about this!I just wanted to see Fayt a little be stronger, I mean his personality! especially in the beginning of the story!
Everything else was perfect! ;) and I really enjoy reading this!
Thanks for sharing! ^_^
9/20/2008 c1 girl-in-america
I'm a huge, huge detail freak. So, while I loved the story overall, I would've killed for some details.
Also, why was that entire bodygaurd/prince lovers thing in there? What did it really provide for the story? For me, it just made me worry about Fayt and Dren's relationship, because what if Dren didn't really have a choice about falling in love with Fayt, and he left the bodygaurd guy without really wanting to?
It's just me, I promise. It's a really lovely story, but I'm...a dork. Hehe.
I'm a huge, huge detail freak. So, while I loved the story overall, I would've killed for some details.
Also, why was that entire bodygaurd/prince lovers thing in there? What did it really provide for the story? For me, it just made me worry about Fayt and Dren's relationship, because what if Dren didn't really have a choice about falling in love with Fayt, and he left the bodygaurd guy without really wanting to?
It's just me, I promise. It's a really lovely story, but I'm...a dork. Hehe.
9/6/2008 c1 Guest
This fiction had an enjoyable concept and beautiful writing style. I loved how the characters were portrayed simply with the setting. But my only problem was the introduction, or lack of detailed intro. You could have worked on that better to add more description to the setting and the plot. But overall good job! And I hope you continue writing!
This fiction had an enjoyable concept and beautiful writing style. I loved how the characters were portrayed simply with the setting. But my only problem was the introduction, or lack of detailed intro. You could have worked on that better to add more description to the setting and the plot. But overall good job! And I hope you continue writing!