for Perceptions of Vampires9/3/2010 c1 
16PopMakesMeBurpy
Are you going to turn this into a story or is it going to be left at this? Personally, I am burnt out of the whole vampire thing, but I would love to read a story about the succubus you mentioned or even a lycan. What I would suggest if you are planning on making this into a vampire story, make it different-make it stand out somehow. I would love to read more of your work.
16PopMakesMeBurpyAre you going to turn this into a story or is it going to be left at this? Personally, I am burnt out of the whole vampire thing, but I would love to read a story about the succubus you mentioned or even a lycan. What I would suggest if you are planning on making this into a vampire story, make it different-make it stand out somehow. I would love to read more of your work.