for Pawn9/11/2008 c1 
12Edalene Athene
This is a realy good story line. Love the end. A little disjointed though and slightly dominated by speech but all in all, very good!
12Edalene AtheneThis is a realy good story line. Love the end. A little disjointed though and slightly dominated by speech but all in all, very good!
9/9/2008 c1 3Rose Grandson
Wow i loved it! I loved how you tied in Becka at the end as well! Great job! I wish there was more. I love storys set in the time you chose, but alas the story must end : ) If you do write moe on this stoy I would love to read it!
3Rose GrandsonWow i loved it! I loved how you tied in Becka at the end as well! Great job! I wish there was more. I love storys set in the time you chose, but alas the story must end : ) If you do write moe on this stoy I would love to read it!