10/21/2015 c1 annayh44
Sadie Hawkins Dance- I've never heard about this while rule is girls ask boys xD but I know nothing alot ~ Wow This story was damn cute.. love the guy name "black eye" and so cute that he was ready to break the rule
Sadie Hawkins Dance- I've never heard about this while rule is girls ask boys xD but I know nothing alot ~ Wow This story was damn cute.. love the guy name "black eye" and so cute that he was ready to break the rule
12/9/2011 c1 46SwimmingThroughExistance
AWWW!1 that was so adorable:) especially the bit where sullivan says he would have broken the rules. feed my addiction and write more one-shots full of fluff3
AWWW!1 that was so adorable:) especially the bit where sullivan says he would have broken the rules. feed my addiction and write more one-shots full of fluff3
7/26/2011 c1 lalaboom
I really liked that it was "high school-centric" and "full-of-fluff" :P Nicole and Sullivan are ADORABLE together. I'll add this to my community. :)
I really liked that it was "high school-centric" and "full-of-fluff" :P Nicole and Sullivan are ADORABLE together. I'll add this to my community. :)
7/20/2010 c1 1ThereAfter
That was a wonderful little oneshot. Admittedly, it wasn't hard to guess where it was going, or that Sullivan would find her at the park, but the way you took us there was enjoyable. I loved the beginning part with the dog. I seriously wish more stories on this site had dogs in them, but that's kind of off topic. Sullivan was cute and sweet, and Nicole seemed down to earth, the kind of girl I can relate to.
So overall this was definitely something I'm glad I read.
Oh, and I think I'm in love with the name Sullivan now.
That was a wonderful little oneshot. Admittedly, it wasn't hard to guess where it was going, or that Sullivan would find her at the park, but the way you took us there was enjoyable. I loved the beginning part with the dog. I seriously wish more stories on this site had dogs in them, but that's kind of off topic. Sullivan was cute and sweet, and Nicole seemed down to earth, the kind of girl I can relate to.
So overall this was definitely something I'm glad I read.
Oh, and I think I'm in love with the name Sullivan now.
7/15/2010 c1 26Jhaynee
Fluff, fluff, fluff galore! I absolutely loved it. It was short, sweet, but absolutely adorable! Sullivan was just...ohmygosh, if she didn't ask him I would have! Haha. Great job :) It was an enjoyable read.
Fluff, fluff, fluff galore! I absolutely loved it. It was short, sweet, but absolutely adorable! Sullivan was just...ohmygosh, if she didn't ask him I would have! Haha. Great job :) It was an enjoyable read.
5/8/2009 c1 eLmo D
aww. cute stuff!
aww. cute stuff!
1/16/2009 c1 holly is fainting
Aw. That was perfect. God, so perfect. You know, I read somewhere once that a short story is complete when the reader is satisfied, and they don't feel a need to know what else happened to the character. I absolutely disagree. I think a short story has succeeded when not only want to know what happened, but you're stuck thinking about it, imagining what you think might have happened.
You're really good at creating mood and tone, something I envy. I think it's hard to do that really well. You're very talented, and I'm going to read more of your work. Adding this to faves, for sure. :)
Aw. That was perfect. God, so perfect. You know, I read somewhere once that a short story is complete when the reader is satisfied, and they don't feel a need to know what else happened to the character. I absolutely disagree. I think a short story has succeeded when not only want to know what happened, but you're stuck thinking about it, imagining what you think might have happened.
You're really good at creating mood and tone, something I envy. I think it's hard to do that really well. You're very talented, and I'm going to read more of your work. Adding this to faves, for sure. :)