
11/22/2008 c1
2PurpleDino
Aww. I personally liked it. What was wrong with the little girl though?
Oh, and tag, your it.

Aww. I personally liked it. What was wrong with the little girl though?
Oh, and tag, your it.
10/30/2008 c1 Link Broken
I actually thought it was about a struggle, and the relationship between the person and their brother.
I liked it. i liked the differences in the att and the "good night" with each stanza.
I actually thought it was about a struggle, and the relationship between the person and their brother.
I liked it. i liked the differences in the att and the "good night" with each stanza.
9/13/2008 c1
5Eagle Seance
Don't worry, it doesn't sound like incest, but nowadays, everyone interprets any kind of love/affection how they want. Anyway, this is a very nice poem. It sounds sweet, but somehow melacholy at thesame time. Enjoyed reading it.

Don't worry, it doesn't sound like incest, but nowadays, everyone interprets any kind of love/affection how they want. Anyway, this is a very nice poem. It sounds sweet, but somehow melacholy at thesame time. Enjoyed reading it.