for One Selfish Love9/12/2008 c1 
2Slightly Spazztic
Woah.
I think this one is better than the other.
It's cool!
Don't worry- I woke up with the world spinning around me, and it continued through algebra.
2Slightly SpazzticWoah.
I think this one is better than the other.
It's cool!
Don't worry- I woke up with the world spinning around me, and it continued through algebra.
9/12/2008 c1 brokencrystal7
beautiful, just beautiful. i dont think there isnt anything else to say. you wrote it so beautifuly but at the same time you can feel that confusion and sadness coming out of the screen. that probably didnt make sense but anywho that was a wonderful piece of poetry. keep up the great work. ^-^
beautiful, just beautiful. i dont think there isnt anything else to say. you wrote it so beautifuly but at the same time you can feel that confusion and sadness coming out of the screen. that probably didnt make sense but anywho that was a wonderful piece of poetry. keep up the great work. ^-^
9/12/2008 c1 62Averybarbarian
Oh! 'tis truly sad, and yet, unfortunately, I know that it is true... Too many people will not let someone go because they "think" the other person loves them. It reminds me of a song called "Face Down" By Red Jumpsuit Apparatus Great song. About a girl who was beaten by her boy friend I would assume and he kept telling her he loved her and that's how he kept her on a chain. But abuse is Never love. Anywhoo Very Well Written! I enjoyed reading this poem though it was sad it is obvious that you put A Lot of thought into this piece. Very well done! Great job! Keep writing =)
62AverybarbarianOh! 'tis truly sad, and yet, unfortunately, I know that it is true... Too many people will not let someone go because they "think" the other person loves them. It reminds me of a song called "Face Down" By Red Jumpsuit Apparatus Great song. About a girl who was beaten by her boy friend I would assume and he kept telling her he loved her and that's how he kept her on a chain. But abuse is Never love. Anywhoo Very Well Written! I enjoyed reading this poem though it was sad it is obvious that you put A Lot of thought into this piece. Very well done! Great job! Keep writing =)