for Ghetto Gospel10/6/2008 c7 sammo00
well I shall continue to review, so at the very least, that's one less person you have to beg :)
awesome chapter. I could really feel the... tenseness in Jane when she was freaking out over Preston showing up before her dad left. and I'm glad cox is pushing Preston. I hope Preston tells him something. although I can quickly see that it will come down to Preston having to choose between Jane and his brother and although I want to say blood is thicker than water, I know that Tim isn't exactly going to make it easy for Preston. haha, he'll probably try to arrest Preston on some trumped-up charge of rape or something!
awesome chapter. and I know you have some very dedicated readers of this story who will be exceptionally disappointed should you decide to quit writing. so don't stop writing! especially now... when this story has SO much potential.
well I shall continue to review, so at the very least, that's one less person you have to beg :)
awesome chapter. I could really feel the... tenseness in Jane when she was freaking out over Preston showing up before her dad left. and I'm glad cox is pushing Preston. I hope Preston tells him something. although I can quickly see that it will come down to Preston having to choose between Jane and his brother and although I want to say blood is thicker than water, I know that Tim isn't exactly going to make it easy for Preston. haha, he'll probably try to arrest Preston on some trumped-up charge of rape or something!
awesome chapter. and I know you have some very dedicated readers of this story who will be exceptionally disappointed should you decide to quit writing. so don't stop writing! especially now... when this story has SO much potential.
10/6/2008 c7 Gaia
Hm... Preston's brother. Not my favorite guy right now. I really did like this chapter a lot, and I honestly want to tell Jane's dad to go fuck off, lol. Keep going, I'm addicted.
Hm... Preston's brother. Not my favorite guy right now. I really did like this chapter a lot, and I honestly want to tell Jane's dad to go fuck off, lol. Keep going, I'm addicted.
10/6/2008 c7 
4Faithfully Connected
Amazing story...probably one of the best stories I've read on this site...actually it is one of the best stories I've read on this site. Keep up the great work and I hope you update soon
4Faithfully ConnectedAmazing story...probably one of the best stories I've read on this site...actually it is one of the best stories I've read on this site. Keep up the great work and I hope you update soon
10/6/2008 c7 amateur.author
I think I like Office Cox and am anxious to see what he's going to be bringing to the story and did Jerome really just send off Preston's friend to be killed? GAH! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I think I like Office Cox and am anxious to see what he's going to be bringing to the story and did Jerome really just send off Preston's friend to be killed? GAH! Can't wait for the next chapter!
10/6/2008 c7 6TurtleBaby43
O! Are they going to? You must update! I love this chapter, I adore it, I don't believe there are enough words to describe how much I love your story! It's my addiction! Don't try to ween me off of it! :)
6TurtleBaby43O! Are they going to? You must update! I love this chapter, I adore it, I don't believe there are enough words to describe how much I love your story! It's my addiction! Don't try to ween me off of it! :)
10/6/2008 c7 20cope
great chapter. i found one small spelling error though - You cops ain’t go no respect - i'm pretty sure that you meant 'got'.
other than that, amazing. very realistic. i can't wait for the next chapter.
20copegreat chapter. i found one small spelling error though - You cops ain’t go no respect - i'm pretty sure that you meant 'got'.
other than that, amazing. very realistic. i can't wait for the next chapter.
10/6/2008 c7 2shellbell10
I love this chapter but l don't get what happened to Lamar. Is he going to die?
2shellbell10I love this chapter but l don't get what happened to Lamar. Is he going to die?
10/6/2008 c7 nicnac100
I like this chapter, because you get a glimpse of Jerome's world. I want to know more about Jerome and Preston relationship. Nice update.
I like this chapter, because you get a glimpse of Jerome's world. I want to know more about Jerome and Preston relationship. Nice update.
10/6/2008 c5 crystalclear
I don't like Jane's dad. Think the realism is good though.
I don't like Jane's dad. Think the realism is good though.
10/6/2008 c6 crystalclear
Preston and Jane are so sweet together. Preston especially is a really good character.
Preston and Jane are so sweet together. Preston especially is a really good character.
10/6/2008 c7 crystalclear
So very good. Really like it.
So very good. Really like it.
10/5/2008 c6 20cope
you're a fan of romeo and juliet, aren't you? the comparisons between this story, especially in this chapter and the last few, and the play are astomishing:
gangs fighting in the streets, the authorities getting involved, star-crossed romance, stolen moments. it's almost all there.
BUT it's good. it's a different take on the whole thing and there's a different swing to it all.
i can't wait for the next chapter!
20copeyou're a fan of romeo and juliet, aren't you? the comparisons between this story, especially in this chapter and the last few, and the play are astomishing:
gangs fighting in the streets, the authorities getting involved, star-crossed romance, stolen moments. it's almost all there.
BUT it's good. it's a different take on the whole thing and there's a different swing to it all.
i can't wait for the next chapter!
10/5/2008 c6 sammo00
aw... yay Jane for finally making P realize how much of a problem his continued silence can be for him in the long run. and yay for Ashley for saying what I've been kind of saying for a while, haha. this is really gonna make me feel bad when stuff starts happening :(
aw... yay Jane for finally making P realize how much of a problem his continued silence can be for him in the long run. and yay for Ashley for saying what I've been kind of saying for a while, haha. this is really gonna make me feel bad when stuff starts happening :(
10/5/2008 c6 nicnac100
I like that their relationship is being fortifed. I hopeing that when problems come their way, they relationship can survive. However, since this is base on Romeo and Juliet, I thinking things won't end well. I love this update and I been looking forward to the next one.
I like that their relationship is being fortifed. I hopeing that when problems come their way, they relationship can survive. However, since this is base on Romeo and Juliet, I thinking things won't end well. I love this update and I been looking forward to the next one.