for Ghetto Gospel9/14/2008 c1 crystal clear
wow, i think i am addicted already and this is only one chapter! can't wait for more!
wow, i think i am addicted already and this is only one chapter! can't wait for more!
9/14/2008 c1 
3shy green rock
I like it. I've read something like this before but the person stopped updating so I'm hoping that you'll keep doing a good job and updating!
3shy green rockI like it. I've read something like this before but the person stopped updating so I'm hoping that you'll keep doing a good job and updating!
9/14/2008 c1 nicnac100
I like your story. It defintely has the vibe of Romeo and Juliet story. Two opposing families and two people falling love from those families. I can wait to read more.
I like your story. It defintely has the vibe of Romeo and Juliet story. Two opposing families and two people falling love from those families. I can wait to read more.
9/13/2008 c1 mer-person
i love all your stories but i was a little nervous about this one. i really cant stand romeo and juliet..it actually really bugs me when people say its the greatest love story of all time considering they only new each other for four days. but anyway, i read this with an open mind and really enjoyed it. you portrayed each of their thoughts beautifully and i cannot wait for more =)
i love all your stories but i was a little nervous about this one. i really cant stand romeo and juliet..it actually really bugs me when people say its the greatest love story of all time considering they only new each other for four days. but anyway, i read this with an open mind and really enjoyed it. you portrayed each of their thoughts beautifully and i cannot wait for more =)