for Ghetto Gospel2/18/2009 c10 
1queetinator
I saw this story as a nominee for SKOW and i am so glad i read it! It couldn't have ended in a better way! This is definitey one of my favorites :)
1queetinatorI saw this story as a nominee for SKOW and i am so glad i read it! It couldn't have ended in a better way! This is definitey one of my favorites :)
2/18/2009 c10 sarah12345
i actually just sat here for like, 2 hours reading this story.
and can i just say, it is probably one of my favourites, and amazingly well written,
the plot was so good, i couldn't stop reading, and Jane and Preston are just amazing.
i love the relationship between them two! and the ending was really nice aswell, i love happy endings!
you should totally be an author - i would buy all of your books!
x
i actually just sat here for like, 2 hours reading this story.
and can i just say, it is probably one of my favourites, and amazingly well written,
the plot was so good, i couldn't stop reading, and Jane and Preston are just amazing.
i love the relationship between them two! and the ending was really nice aswell, i love happy endings!
you should totally be an author - i would buy all of your books!
x
2/17/2009 c10 punkrock13
hey great story! i was just wondering how Jerome knew what Jane looked like and how he knew about Chris? i'm guessing they kept in contact with Preston's Aunt Bree and she kept him informed.
hey great story! i was just wondering how Jerome knew what Jane looked like and how he knew about Chris? i'm guessing they kept in contact with Preston's Aunt Bree and she kept him informed.
2/15/2009 c10 B-Dooliie
wow. i actually love interracial stories, and this was definitly one of the best. wow. it was so well written. you know what made me laugh? i was trying to imagine Jane saying "a'ght" lol. your characters were so real, they just reeled you in, and the plot was realistic. amazing story.
wow. i actually love interracial stories, and this was definitly one of the best. wow. it was so well written. you know what made me laugh? i was trying to imagine Jane saying "a'ght" lol. your characters were so real, they just reeled you in, and the plot was realistic. amazing story.
2/10/2009 c10 ashley
OMG this is such a good story really.
The way you write about the love and problems between Preston and Jane is just amazing, I can really envision the trouble they had to go trough just because of their skin. That was well written indeed.
The street-life all the guys had, killing characters we just got to know a bit like Lamar I found it sad but it was wonderful for the story itself and gace another dimension to it. all the takes of the police and the dealers was great I really believe it happens like that.
Most of the time I don't read stories that are this 'deep' if you know what I mean I tend to move more to the lighthearted cliche stories but I loved this one and I'm happy I came across it
Ashley
OMG this is such a good story really.
The way you write about the love and problems between Preston and Jane is just amazing, I can really envision the trouble they had to go trough just because of their skin. That was well written indeed.
The street-life all the guys had, killing characters we just got to know a bit like Lamar I found it sad but it was wonderful for the story itself and gace another dimension to it. all the takes of the police and the dealers was great I really believe it happens like that.
Most of the time I don't read stories that are this 'deep' if you know what I mean I tend to move more to the lighthearted cliche stories but I loved this one and I'm happy I came across it
Ashley
2/9/2009 c2 KORANA
GOSH DANG THIS IS GOOD I BELIEVE IN WHAT YOU WRITE ABOUT NOT THE RACIEST PART BUT THE LOVE OF BLACK AND WHIT CAUSE I'M HALF BLACK AND HALF WHITE!
GOSH DANG THIS IS GOOD I BELIEVE IN WHAT YOU WRITE ABOUT NOT THE RACIEST PART BUT THE LOVE OF BLACK AND WHIT CAUSE I'M HALF BLACK AND HALF WHITE!
2/8/2009 c1 KORANA
OH...MI...GAH THAT FIRST CHAPTER WAS AWESOME GIRL/OR BOY YOU CAN WRITE THAT IS FOR SURE!
OH...MI...GAH THAT FIRST CHAPTER WAS AWESOME GIRL/OR BOY YOU CAN WRITE THAT IS FOR SURE!
2/2/2009 c10 3J. Marit
Officially my favorite fic. Hands down. Words cannot describe my thoughts on this I don't think, heh. You had me hooked from the first meeting. Your writing is amazing, your characters - i fell in love with all of them. Or mostly all of them heh. I hope one day you get published so I can add this to my collection.
Simply, amazing.
Thanks.
3J. MaritOfficially my favorite fic. Hands down. Words cannot describe my thoughts on this I don't think, heh. You had me hooked from the first meeting. Your writing is amazing, your characters - i fell in love with all of them. Or mostly all of them heh. I hope one day you get published so I can add this to my collection.
Simply, amazing.
Thanks.
1/29/2009 c10 Zuba
This has to be the most romantic and sweetest story i have ever read honestly, i can't enough of yummy Preston and beautiful Jane they real are an awesome couple and it would be really cool if theres was more bout them i even read Crazy and beautiful..at least five times lol, be seriously a awesome story !
This has to be the most romantic and sweetest story i have ever read honestly, i can't enough of yummy Preston and beautiful Jane they real are an awesome couple and it would be really cool if theres was more bout them i even read Crazy and beautiful..at least five times lol, be seriously a awesome story !
1/29/2009 c10 consilium
Hello =)
I must say, that this is probably my favorite story now!:D It has just `that´, is original, and I was sad that this was the final chapter. =) I just love this story, and the characters is really good portayed. My favorite couple, I have to say ;)
So, have you ever thought about a sequel? I would love that, but at the same time not. Sequels usually is about someone else, and I would rather read more about Preston and Jane, than anyone else. But I would be ecstatic to read more about them! I would love to read about how they dealt with the pregnancy, how to find a apartment, everything! :D
Okay, sorry about my ranting, I will stop now..
I will probably re-read this story about 15 times before summer, it is that good, just so you know ;)
Cheers,
Hello =)
I must say, that this is probably my favorite story now!:D It has just `that´, is original, and I was sad that this was the final chapter. =) I just love this story, and the characters is really good portayed. My favorite couple, I have to say ;)
So, have you ever thought about a sequel? I would love that, but at the same time not. Sequels usually is about someone else, and I would rather read more about Preston and Jane, than anyone else. But I would be ecstatic to read more about them! I would love to read about how they dealt with the pregnancy, how to find a apartment, everything! :D
Okay, sorry about my ranting, I will stop now..
I will probably re-read this story about 15 times before summer, it is that good, just so you know ;)
Cheers,
1/26/2009 c10 5All Good Things
Hi! I just read this story after seeing it was nominated for a SKoW award and basically all I can say is - wow.
I was really convinced that Preston was going to be shot or arrested, right up until chapter nine, but I'm so, so glad he wasn't. I love the happy ending. I also find it interesting that I found myself kind of sad that the King Crew got taken down - I think that shows how powerful the story was.
Anyway, great job!
5All Good ThingsHi! I just read this story after seeing it was nominated for a SKoW award and basically all I can say is - wow.
I was really convinced that Preston was going to be shot or arrested, right up until chapter nine, but I'm so, so glad he wasn't. I love the happy ending. I also find it interesting that I found myself kind of sad that the King Crew got taken down - I think that shows how powerful the story was.
Anyway, great job!
1/22/2009 c10 1Elizabeth Parks
Smashing! Its not the Romeo and Juliet story it was soo much better! Love it!
1Elizabeth ParksSmashing! Its not the Romeo and Juliet story it was soo much better! Love it!
1/15/2009 c1 hdwihdk
Wow! i really liked this first chapter. i hope to read the rest of the story soon when i have more time. i really like where this is going, and i love the romeo and juliet-esque feel to it: infatuation at first sight. This reminds me of the story I wrote called Scandal! in Honeyville, where a snobbish white girl obsesses over a biracial boy in the same romeo and juliet-esque style. This is so interesting! i love it so far :) great job!
Wow! i really liked this first chapter. i hope to read the rest of the story soon when i have more time. i really like where this is going, and i love the romeo and juliet-esque feel to it: infatuation at first sight. This reminds me of the story I wrote called Scandal! in Honeyville, where a snobbish white girl obsesses over a biracial boy in the same romeo and juliet-esque style. This is so interesting! i love it so far :) great job!