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10/7/2008 c1 16Bobertkins
As I continue to go through your poems, I'm liking them more and more. You definitely have a gift to present your feelings in such a fluid way. Structure wise, this poem is sound, content-wise, it is to true. Mechanically, I could only find that you wrote where when you meant we're in the last line. I think so far out of the three poems I've read so far, this is the best you've done!

Keep up the good work!

9/13/2008 c1 4I see London I see Sam's Town
I'm not particularly religious myself (I don't attend church), but I do have strong faith/belief system due to my family background and the way I've been raised.

I have to say that I did like this :) Typically, I'll point something out about punctuation or whatever, but all seems good here. I also agree with Mondays through Fridays, Saturdays, and then Sundays-it's a standard that does hold true for some people.

Happy writing ~ J.V. :)

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