for It's easy on Sundays10/7/2008 c1 
16Bobertkins
As I continue to go through your poems, I'm liking them more and more. You definitely have a gift to present your feelings in such a fluid way. Structure wise, this poem is sound, content-wise, it is to true. Mechanically, I could only find that you wrote where when you meant we're in the last line. I think so far out of the three poems I've read so far, this is the best you've done!
Keep up the good work!
_Bobertkins
16BobertkinsAs I continue to go through your poems, I'm liking them more and more. You definitely have a gift to present your feelings in such a fluid way. Structure wise, this poem is sound, content-wise, it is to true. Mechanically, I could only find that you wrote where when you meant we're in the last line. I think so far out of the three poems I've read so far, this is the best you've done!
Keep up the good work!
_Bobertkins
9/13/2008 c1 4I see London I see Sam's Town
I'm not particularly religious myself (I don't attend church), but I do have strong faith/belief system due to my family background and the way I've been raised.
I have to say that I did like this :) Typically, I'll point something out about punctuation or whatever, but all seems good here. I also agree with Mondays through Fridays, Saturdays, and then Sundays-it's a standard that does hold true for some people.
Happy writing ~ J.V. :)
4I see London I see Sam's TownI'm not particularly religious myself (I don't attend church), but I do have strong faith/belief system due to my family background and the way I've been raised.
I have to say that I did like this :) Typically, I'll point something out about punctuation or whatever, but all seems good here. I also agree with Mondays through Fridays, Saturdays, and then Sundays-it's a standard that does hold true for some people.
Happy writing ~ J.V. :)