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Absolutely brilliant! Great story filled with humour, love, and pure ability in capturing my attention through every single word! Thank you for sharing it with us :)
Absolutely brilliant! Great story filled with humour, love, and pure ability in capturing my attention through every single word! Thank you for sharing it with us :)
8/28/2012 c20 
19Alaeryel
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY Myst AND AM ANXIOUS TO READ THE SEQUEL-AMAZING PERFECTION!
19AlaeryelI ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY Myst AND AM ANXIOUS TO READ THE SEQUEL-AMAZING PERFECTION!
8/28/2012 c18 Alaeryel
BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING-AND DAMN IT TO HELL-MAYBE I DON'T WANT TO KILL Cassandra anymore BUT STILL WANT TO KICK HER ASS!
BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING-AND DAMN IT TO HELL-MAYBE I DON'T WANT TO KILL Cassandra anymore BUT STILL WANT TO KICK HER ASS!
8/28/2012 c14 Alaeryel
OH MY FU** GOD-THAT BITCH and even KNOWING it isn't his! I SO WANT HER DEAD AND BURIED! I hate girls, women etc who do sh** like that-it never once crossed my mind to do SOMETHING THAT HORRIBLE when I was in that POSITION but then again I was older than she is suppose to be BUT THAT DOESN'T MATTER! Sorry this SUBJECT IS A SORE SUBJECT FOR ME! BUT I wll say this YOU, MY DEAR, have written this with PERFECTION AND GRACE! Sometimes I will be honest to say-I GET TOO MUCH EMOTION FROM A STORY-SO I DO APOLOGIZE FOR THAT but I DO NOT apologize for what I think of Cassandra!
OH MY FU** GOD-THAT BITCH and even KNOWING it isn't his! I SO WANT HER DEAD AND BURIED! I hate girls, women etc who do sh** like that-it never once crossed my mind to do SOMETHING THAT HORRIBLE when I was in that POSITION but then again I was older than she is suppose to be BUT THAT DOESN'T MATTER! Sorry this SUBJECT IS A SORE SUBJECT FOR ME! BUT I wll say this YOU, MY DEAR, have written this with PERFECTION AND GRACE! Sometimes I will be honest to say-I GET TOO MUCH EMOTION FROM A STORY-SO I DO APOLOGIZE FOR THAT but I DO NOT apologize for what I think of Cassandra!
8/28/2012 c13 Alaeryel
NOW-HERE FINALLY COMES THE TWIST and the turmoil-EXCELLENTLY DONE and I was ENTRANCED how unlike most times-friends liking the same girl ends the friendship YOU actually allowed it to remain in tact-LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT! You have my HEART BOUNCING all over the place with this story and ESPECIALLY this chapter Myst-I HAVE TO BOW TO YOUR WRITING ABILITIES!
NOW-HERE FINALLY COMES THE TWIST and the turmoil-EXCELLENTLY DONE and I was ENTRANCED how unlike most times-friends liking the same girl ends the friendship YOU actually allowed it to remain in tact-LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT! You have my HEART BOUNCING all over the place with this story and ESPECIALLY this chapter Myst-I HAVE TO BOW TO YOUR WRITING ABILITIES!
8/28/2012 c12 Alaeryel
I am actually NOW leaning towards Creston and Essa-but maybe that is just a bit of wishful thinking on my part! I loved the way you wrote their meeting at the ice cream shop and later at the park. It would be INTERRESTING to see where this may lead. They have both had an effect on each other and I AM ENJOYING THE CHANGE IMMENSELY!
I am actually NOW leaning towards Creston and Essa-but maybe that is just a bit of wishful thinking on my part! I loved the way you wrote their meeting at the ice cream shop and later at the park. It would be INTERRESTING to see where this may lead. They have both had an effect on each other and I AM ENJOYING THE CHANGE IMMENSELY!
8/28/2012 c11 Alaeryel
OMG OMG OMG Myst-I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR EITHER CRESTON OR CHRIS TO KISS HER and DAMN IT I THOUGHT YOU DID AN EXCEPTIONAL JOB of this AND of the way the decent side of him responded when he REALIZED what he had done! IT MADE MY HEART FLUTTER! OUTSTANDING!
OMG OMG OMG Myst-I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR EITHER CRESTON OR CHRIS TO KISS HER and DAMN IT I THOUGHT YOU DID AN EXCEPTIONAL JOB of this AND of the way the decent side of him responded when he REALIZED what he had done! IT MADE MY HEART FLUTTER! OUTSTANDING!
8/28/2012 c10 Alaeryel
OMG BRILLIANT AS USUAL Myst-divorce is hard at any age but especially to children and teenagers -teenagers especially depending on what they grew up watching aka fighting, screaming, etc-I was 27 when my parents divorced and though it was hard I was in California and not in Oregon when it happened. Mom was real good at keeping alot of the problems from our ears and it was devastating learning it as an adult. You did a MARVELOUS job writing it! I am ACTUALLY quite PROUD OF Ava and how she handled it myself. Most women would take it without question and I am PLEASED she wanted nothing to do with it whether he was doing it out of guilt or pity-in a sense she was a STRONG, OPINIONATED WOMAN STANDING UP FOR HERSELF even though I am sure the pain she was feeling also RIPPED through her. I wanted to smack the crap out of him when he left and threw back that it had been over for awhile-like he was hoping Ava would run and throw her arms around him and beg him not to go-I AM THRILLED SHE STOOD HER GROUND! ALOT OF TURMOIL in this one!
OMG BRILLIANT AS USUAL Myst-divorce is hard at any age but especially to children and teenagers -teenagers especially depending on what they grew up watching aka fighting, screaming, etc-I was 27 when my parents divorced and though it was hard I was in California and not in Oregon when it happened. Mom was real good at keeping alot of the problems from our ears and it was devastating learning it as an adult. You did a MARVELOUS job writing it! I am ACTUALLY quite PROUD OF Ava and how she handled it myself. Most women would take it without question and I am PLEASED she wanted nothing to do with it whether he was doing it out of guilt or pity-in a sense she was a STRONG, OPINIONATED WOMAN STANDING UP FOR HERSELF even though I am sure the pain she was feeling also RIPPED through her. I wanted to smack the crap out of him when he left and threw back that it had been over for awhile-like he was hoping Ava would run and throw her arms around him and beg him not to go-I AM THRILLED SHE STOOD HER GROUND! ALOT OF TURMOIL in this one!
8/28/2012 c9 Alaeryel
OK MY DEAR-this chapter did more than make me cry-I OUT AND OUT BAWLED-LIKE A BABY! DAMN GIRL-I will say it again-you WRITE and CONVEY such EMOTION that it is IMPOSSIBLE to separate myself from them! Creston also made me smile and WELL HELL-EVERYTHING WAS SPECTACULAR! LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!
OK MY DEAR-this chapter did more than make me cry-I OUT AND OUT BAWLED-LIKE A BABY! DAMN GIRL-I will say it again-you WRITE and CONVEY such EMOTION that it is IMPOSSIBLE to separate myself from them! Creston also made me smile and WELL HELL-EVERYTHING WAS SPECTACULAR! LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!
8/28/2012 c7 Alaeryel
LOVED the way you wrote and presented this chapter Myst-as always it was PERFECTION! It was good to see them get along for once (playing soccer) and how Creston was able to SHOCK her! I HAVE FALLEN DEEPLY AND IRREVOCABLY in LOVE with this story! AN OUTSTANDING AND EXCELLENT STORY, WRITING, AND AND EVERYTHING!
LOVED the way you wrote and presented this chapter Myst-as always it was PERFECTION! It was good to see them get along for once (playing soccer) and how Creston was able to SHOCK her! I HAVE FALLEN DEEPLY AND IRREVOCABLY in LOVE with this story! AN OUTSTANDING AND EXCELLENT STORY, WRITING, AND AND EVERYTHING!
8/28/2012 c6 Alaeryel
Again-I JUST LOVE Essa's character-she is PERFECTION in the sense she doesn't try to fit in but she is her own person! I LOVE Chris just for the fact that yes he is PLAYER and POPULAR but there is depth to his character AND-Creston-he is becoming a puzzlement to me-he is ARROGANT and COCKY BUT I also am beginning to see another minute amount of another side to him also-you are ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!
Again-I JUST LOVE Essa's character-she is PERFECTION in the sense she doesn't try to fit in but she is her own person! I LOVE Chris just for the fact that yes he is PLAYER and POPULAR but there is depth to his character AND-Creston-he is becoming a puzzlement to me-he is ARROGANT and COCKY BUT I also am beginning to see another minute amount of another side to him also-you are ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!