
10/14/2008 c1
2florations
it's a hella different! hahas, didn't think you would re-write it tho. the original one was perfect, or IS perfect except for the wrong grammars/spellings. no offense meant. hahas. (: but still continue on hahas! (:

it's a hella different! hahas, didn't think you would re-write it tho. the original one was perfect, or IS perfect except for the wrong grammars/spellings. no offense meant. hahas. (: but still continue on hahas! (:
10/10/2008 c1
1JoiZ. D
Ah... interesting. Quite different from your original story, but hey, it has improvements. :) I love both of your stories a lot!
Keep up the good work!

Ah... interesting. Quite different from your original story, but hey, it has improvements. :) I love both of your stories a lot!
Keep up the good work!
9/26/2008 c1
19toffeecakesxox
(raises hand!) What about me? :P I mean, I might not have time, and all, so yeah... which sucks. But, I'll try my best! :D Just in case, you should get a back-up. :P
Awesome rewrite-beginning!
Strawberry xx

(raises hand!) What about me? :P I mean, I might not have time, and all, so yeah... which sucks. But, I'll try my best! :D Just in case, you should get a back-up. :P
Awesome rewrite-beginning!
Strawberry xx
9/14/2008 c1
1Izzey
awesome first chapter! what exactly is a beta reader? that probably is a stupid question but i honestly don't know. umm, so yeah. anyways, please update again when ever you can

awesome first chapter! what exactly is a beta reader? that probably is a stupid question but i honestly don't know. umm, so yeah. anyways, please update again when ever you can
9/14/2008 c1 oxsarahxo
hey iv read like all your stories and i think that you should do a year to live and love and a a summer at skinny camp first... =] then come back to the rewrite!
BUT the rewrite sounds awesome =]
love sarah =]
hey iv read like all your stories and i think that you should do a year to live and love and a a summer at skinny camp first... =] then come back to the rewrite!
BUT the rewrite sounds awesome =]
love sarah =]
9/14/2008 c1
2artistic dreamer
ohh a rewrite, i wonder how it's going to be different from the first one. i loved the first one and i know this will be just as good. so is Eden still going to be babysitting or is the summer job sorta a replacement for that?

ohh a rewrite, i wonder how it's going to be different from the first one. i loved the first one and i know this will be just as good. so is Eden still going to be babysitting or is the summer job sorta a replacement for that?