for Poet's Tale9/17/2008 c1 
99E.M. Laicrist
I really enjoyed your use of structure for this. It's something fresh to me. My favorite line would ahve to be "I think the gods answer prayers sideways." Wonderful concept. It'd be interesting to see how the poem's affected if you took the dialogue portions and added a few line breaks.
99E.M. LaicristI really enjoyed your use of structure for this. It's something fresh to me. My favorite line would ahve to be "I think the gods answer prayers sideways." Wonderful concept. It'd be interesting to see how the poem's affected if you took the dialogue portions and added a few line breaks.
9/17/2008 c1 Unknown Survivor
Wow. That was interesting and well done. I've never seen any other piece quite like this one. Good job. (:
~Unknown Survivor~
Wow. That was interesting and well done. I've never seen any other piece quite like this one. Good job. (:
~Unknown Survivor~