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for that burning itch

11/29/2008 c1 9ThePixess
I like that this is so vauge; everybody freaks out about *something*, and I think your decision not to label just what that something is makes the whole piece work better. Plus that whole idea of anxiety eating a person up inside is conveyed so well here. I love it.
11/1/2008 c1 1smellgoody
this is SO god! made me sad.
9/17/2008 c1 55BlackxXxRose
Amazing piece of work, darling. The tone was so desperate and frustrated, I love it! It reminds me of my struggle to stop cutting.
9/17/2008 c1 19WeAreBroken
I like the beginging more than the end.

I Love the word itch to label a habit, i've used that too.

you know they say if you scatch it'll spread...
9/17/2008 c1 128vitriolicvermilion
I really like how your poems convey emotion.

I never would've understood that kind of problem without poems like this.

And plus, they flow well, are immensely entertaining, and give amazing visuals.
9/17/2008 c1 260gg. lass
this is really interesting.

it has a desperate tone to it.

i like it.

nice job.

yours until the wind changes,

gg

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